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Challenge 17 entry

Feb 20, 2006 04:08

Title: Exaltation
Prompt: #17 - Upward
Rating: G
Characters: Holly
Points to: The Unofficial Jade Princess Fan Club
Words: 100

( gamboling, skipping, rushing )

Comments 3

thewhitelily February 20 2006, 05:58:07 UTC

Nice! Clear, yet says so much. I particularly like the doubled upward!ness. :D

Actually, I was surprised at the line "He wasn't waiting anymore." I was expecting Jolliet...

kittyrainbow February 20 2006, 18:44:16 UTC

Thanks. :D I normally do try and get a themex2 into my drabbles, or at least let the title have two applicable meanings. (As it does here.) Somehow I feel it lends something extra to something so short.

Heh! Well, don't forget, I am also an H/A, A/J, H/R and H/F shipper. XD; Besides, how could I have notworkingout!Jolliet?

blueyeti February 21 2006, 04:27:50 UTC

Oh, I liked that. At first I was thinking that the Ineviable War had gone on long enough that the crew up Above had died of old age by the time it finished. I like the 'tide of other people's happiness', especially.