Challenge 22 - Thanks

[fairyhunter]

Title: To Give, to Take 
Prompt: Thanks 
Genre: General, Poetry 
Rating: G 
Words: 107 (to my eternal shame) 
Points To: The Attic Asylum

Summary: Mother and son thank fairy.

-Thank you for your gift of gold, as wry as this may seem. 
--Thanks to the one I’ll never know, who saved me from my dreams. 
-Thank you, for you’re brave and bold, and taught me how

Comments

[anonymous]

A deals a deal and thats how i play for everything given somethings taken away

[humble_mosquito]

Good job, FH, dear. Got the place rolling. No all we need is Alde and Lily and me to get in here and post something.

I like the beat of the thing and I like the ICness; I don't like the rhyme. The angst is lovely, but - I don't know - I guess the rhyme is too easy to fit with that. I don't know.

Anyway, nice job.