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afiakate

Memento Mori - Life drabble

Feb 20, 2010 11:58

Crews finds Reese's father. 100 words precisely. Also, floods and sand flies.

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Comments 4

belantana February 21 2010, 00:54:35 UTC

Oh, this is brilliant. By which I mean awful, and disgusting, and sad, and ominous, and perfect. !!!!!!!!! And three prompts in exactly 100 words! You are the master.

The flesh was soft beneath his finger. He looked up, and said “It’s him.”

This is so Crews. That wonderful quiet about him. Yayyyy.

afiakate February 22 2010, 01:45:58 UTC

As usual, you are too kind. Thanks for the great prompt!

And because you didn't think Jack Reese wasn't dead, I decided I needed to revisit the prompt. The redux version is up now on my lj.

Thanks, as always, for reading!

londonsophie February 21 2010, 21:08:10 UTC

Oh! I like! As belantana says, it has that Crews understatedness about it. I love all the decay, and also "the eart was transient in this part of the world". Lovely.

afiakate February 22 2010, 01:47:09 UTC

Thanks for reading and for the lovely words.!

I decided that I needed to revisit the prompt, and so there is now an alternate version up on my lj.