Car (Kink Bingo: Vehicle)

[afiawri]

Title: Car
Author: Afiawri
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Peter
Warnings: Sex in the car, orgasm denial
Word Count: 531

Comments

[photoash]

Poor Neal!!! Left hanging on the edge O_O I bet he totally pouted and/or went to jerk off in a mens room somewhere.

I love how they were rocking the car and fogging up the windows <3

[afiawri]

Thanks. Neal so had to resort to pouting the rest of the stake out.

I tried to keep the kink front and center. Short of having them fuck on the hood, this was the best way I could do it. Mmm, now I'm going to have to write that. ;)

[daria234]

Mmmm... this was very hot! I love evil!toppy!Peter. Because he's just being mean :)

Great one!

[afiawri]

Poor Neal; when I'm writing him, he rarely gets off. Perhaps Peter is a bit mean.

Thank you!

[ursula4x]

The Taurus made Peter stop. It's sentient and a jealous bitch.

[afiawri]

Yeah, you don't fuck with that car. Or you don't fuck Peter in that car. Either, really. :)

[hoosierbitch]

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OMG, how much do I love that they're making out while on a pointless stake-out? A LOT, IS HOW MUCH I LOVE IT. Neal straddling Peter, Peter playing with his balls, THE ENDING - wonderful job!

[afiawri]

Thank you!

[misura]

All right, if Peter's not getting some sort of payback for that ending, then there is no justice in the world. *g*

(All right, okay, I guess I can kind of see where he'd be coming from, and it was Neal who got things started, but even so ... ).

Whew. That was a pretty hot piece of hotness.

[afiawri]

Oh, you're so right. Neal needs to get revenge.

(But let's not forget- Peter didn't get off either ;) )

Thank you!