Displace

Oct 04, 2010 14:24

Title: Displace
Author: Afiawri
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Neal Caffrey
Warnings: None
Word Count: 100
Notes: for whitecollar100's 14th prompt: paper

Skyscrapers push into the prompt. The words “ge 102)” and, under that, “omplete senten” stretch over the Empire State Building. The spire sits a pencil width to the left of “Name: Neal Caffrey Crammed ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, fandom: white collar, rated: g

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photoash October 4 2010, 20:01:30 UTC
I love the unique way you presented this :) it is clear Neal won't be around much longer and I love how you gave that feeling with such few words!

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afiawri October 5 2010, 19:21:53 UTC
Thank you. :) I felt like I needed something different.

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vexed_wench October 4 2010, 20:05:18 UTC
This was very nicely done.

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afiawri October 5 2010, 19:22:04 UTC
Thank you very much. :D

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ladygray99 October 5 2010, 01:53:13 UTC
Wonderful. It took me a couple of readings to get what you were doing but this is great. Thank you.

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afiawri October 5 2010, 20:06:44 UTC
Thank you. :D

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