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The Con Man's Daughter

Dec 04, 2010 19:56

Title: The Con Man's Daughter
Author: Afiawri
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Neal, some OFCs, Peter
Word Count: 1670
Thanks: to the mods of whitecollarswap for running this swap
Fic for: preromantics

( Peter asked no questions of her until she was seated in the conference room with her daughter asleep against her thin designer-clothed shoulder. )

!fanfiction, fandom: white collar, rated: pg

Comments 17

rabidchild December 5 2010, 14:57:11 UTC

This is so lovely. Alessia is a little con in her own right.

afiawri December 5 2010, 21:51:53 UTC

Yes, she is. Thank you so much.

photoash December 5 2010, 15:32:59 UTC

Lovely little glimpse into a possibility. I like how Alessia was precocious without being overbearing!

Neal was very IC - I love that he lost his charm under pressure!

afiawri December 5 2010, 22:20:36 UTC

Thank you! <3 And thank you for hand holding on this one.

daria234 December 5 2010, 19:43:18 UTC

lmao that she's a brilliant little con artist at seven - that rocks

I like that Neal has all these contradictory thoughts. And that Peter really doesn't know how to react. that was all so realistic. love it

afiawri December 5 2010, 22:20:47 UTC

Thanks! Glad to hear it

zalman23 December 10 2010, 02:01:25 UTC

So cute~~~! Really warm and sweet, a tiny version of Neal is just totally adorable!

afiawri December 13 2010, 05:13:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear you think so. (And yes, I'm working on your drabble! It's coming much slower than I expected, however...)

zalman23 December 14 2010, 01:45:48 UTC

Woooo, yay! Palm against face, holding my breath~ Doesn't matter, I'm patient!XD

klutzy_girl December 15 2010, 15:30:59 UTC

Awww, this was cute! I loved it.

afiawri December 15 2010, 19:05:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad to hear it.