Enduring

[afiawri]

Title: Enduring
Author: Afiawri
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Peter
Warnings: Explicit Sex
Word Count: 1,333 words
Thanks: To everyone who participated in my song meme.
For: Zalman23

Comments

[rabidchild]

Um, yeah....brb...

even if it hurt a little, it would satisfy more"

Can I marry you for writing this line, and this line alone? :D

[afiawri]

LOL. Thank you! <3

[zalman23]

Ohhhhhh, Neal, why not? He clearly loves you too! Why don’t you believe it?!
I started reading thinking this is as hot as a burning fireball in this freezing winter, and then in the end you turned it into such a bittersweet, fia, you always got a way with making a hot piece of porn into something more. <3
Dancing in a circle around you and chanting all the way, this is the best Christmas EVER! Got my own private ficlet~
Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, and be very, very productive next year! XD

[afiawri]

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, dear. I'm so glad to hear you liked your present!

[ursula4x]

That was wonderful! Very intense and I loved Neal to whom words come easy being unable to say I love you to Peter.

[afiawri]

Thank you so much!

[jrosemary]

Gorgeous writing--but so sad in a way, and so bittersweet at the end! I hope Neal learns to say it out loud, when Peter's awake to hear it. (Or I hope Peter has the sense to say it first. Either way.)

[afiawri]

Oh, wow, thank you!

In my head, Peter wasn't completely out and wakes up the next morning thinking about it. I don't know where it goes from there, but I imagine they do work it out. ;)

[photoash]

Awww it's so bittersweet :) I love how it hurts more than it feels good but that Neal needs it all the same! lovely imagery and descriptions :)

[afiawri]

Thanks! :D