Ficlets from Elrhiarhodan's Promptfest

Feb 22, 2011 19:34

Title: How to Scare a Man in Five Seconds
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fandom: white collar, rated: g, rated: r, rated: pg

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daria234 February 23 2011, 05:51:33 UTC
These are AMAZING.

I love Diana's thoughts on men and women and Neal and everything!!

The El one was so sexy with such great outdoors imagery, and the Adler one makes so much sense with canon it was great.

The last one I LOVE too. This little moment of sharing an old photo, of Neal revealing their hidden past together, and all the little gestures you include - it's a really funny fic, but it feels like a deeply intimate moment too, somehow, and I don't know why, but I thought it was great.

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afiawri February 25 2011, 18:00:28 UTC
Thank you so much! <3

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zalman23 February 23 2011, 08:06:33 UTC
OMG, I LOVE the last one! Please don't hate me for only commenting on this one, as I'm a shameless-peter/neal-pairing-slash-exclusive reader, yeah, shame on me...
And the title, is sooo smart! And this 200 words paint a thousand words of their dynamics too, well done!
As smart as Neal may be, Peter always have a way to get back at him. Love love love~

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afiawri February 25 2011, 18:01:17 UTC
I'd never hate you for commenting on what you like. ;)

Thank you so much!

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jrosemary April 8 2011, 02:39:51 UTC
These are Excellent!

How to Scare a Man--Ok, Diana officially scares me, lol. (I've known that for a while.) Brilliant job getting into her head, and I like her thoughts about how women with a swagger have usually earned it.

Where the Wind Comes from--This vision of Elizabeth on that sloped hill is gorgeous.

Of Birds and Stones--I found this one disturbing and gut-wrenching at the same time.

A Thousand Words--My favorite! Neal teasing Peter with that snapshot is perfect, as is Peter's calm acceptance. :)

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afiawri April 8 2011, 07:10:12 UTC
Wow, you actually read them all. Thank you! This was a wonderful review to receive!

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sherylyn February 13 2016, 07:18:24 UTC
Okay, soooo… I somehow *just* found your writing a few days ago, and I'm drowning in all this WC gloriousness. I love it all, seriously. And these are all perfect, completely. <3

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