james ward

Aug 30, 2006 03:02

I wanted desperately to cling to that Wednesday, to dig my nails into the W and maybe slide down to the D, but that was as far as I was going, just to be safe. No midnight had ever seemed quite so disfigured, so unnatural in its open eyed zeros. They were staring me down to my tanned flesh and farther, and the horror went beyond the embarrassment ( Read more... )

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beewest August 30 2006, 11:14:50 UTC
thank you so much for this. im writing my college essay ight now. please use something like this for yours. i think its amazing. ive missed your writing.

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beewest August 30 2006, 11:15:20 UTC
i especially like clinging to the W and sliding down into the D. i cant say how good of a writer i think that you are

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afiendishthingy August 30 2006, 20:29:44 UTC
ahh i started writing this as my college essay actually, but then got tired of bringing it to an actual point, or making it have any actual value or happy conclusion and so i just decided to use it as the next best thing: a livejournal entry.
i really liked yours by the way. there are a few things in there i especially liked, i will point them out to you later. but i am pretty sure you rhymed o'hara and era and that's awesome.

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soullessfeather August 30 2006, 22:09:25 UTC
i like this. right before i read it, I started writing a song that i think you're going to like. there's something in the air, i guess.

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missingmypickle August 31 2006, 00:54:02 UTC
Maaaan, this is so awesome. I want to write like you. How do you think of these things? It's really ridiculously cool.

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greatscones August 31 2006, 01:25:55 UTC
james ward
that's all

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