Comments | afina_shining: The Stone walls of Spinner's End- Snarry- NC-17 [oneshot]

afina_shining

The Stone walls of Spinner's End- Snarry- NC-17 [oneshot]

Nov 27, 2009 22:49

Title: Stone walls of Spinner's End
Chapters: oneshot
Pairing/Characters: Snape/Harry
Wordcount: 1280
Genre: PWP
Warnings: swearing, m/m sex, public sex, misuse of petrifying spells, cutting curses and stone walls.
Rating:NC-17
Beta: the_flic (thank you so much!)
Summary: angry sex fic.

( stone walls of Spinner's End )

fanfiction, harry potter

Comments 30

accioslash November 27 2009, 13:51:30 UTC

Oh, I love the unique way you used Sectumsempra! So many possibilities there! And congratulations on your first Snarry!

afina_shining November 27 2009, 13:54:46 UTC

thank you three times!
1. for reading it!
2/ for liking it!
3. for your congratulations!
and another thanks for noticing the way i used that spell XD that was generally the idea!

asnowyowl November 27 2009, 13:55:48 UTC

Very nice! You did great for your first Snarry. Angry sex against a wall - Yum!!

afina_shining November 27 2009, 13:57:04 UTC

THANK YOU!
i'm really happy with such good feedback!! and i've just posted it!!!
GUYS YOU'RE THE BEST!

reg_flint November 27 2009, 14:03:54 UTC

A neat llittle fic, even if they are (gorgeously, given the circumstances) OOC, or at least, Severus is. Some smut fascinates me but yaoi is always good. Well done for a first Snarry, very well done "angry sex"...the inspiration for Sectumsempera was briliant.

afina_shining November 27 2009, 22:32:14 UTC

uhm... thanks!

afina_shining November 27 2009, 22:50:55 UTC

"the thing is, you don't seem to distingush sex from violence "
that really got me, you know. HURT me.
of all people i didn't think you'll miss the complete immaturity of my writing, therefore there maybe mishaps in it! i've never written rough!sex before so somebody might think i'm confusing the terms. BUT ASSUMING ABOUT ME AND MY PERSONALITY IS BELOW THE BELT, PLZ KEEP THIS TO URSELF.

reg_flint November 27 2009, 23:02:54 UTC

My apologies. That is why I edited the comment, so as not to spit venom. I did not intend to hurt you. You likely won't believe that, but it was not my intention. I worried about your reaction and edited it. You are right, it was below the belt. I will keep my venom to myself, and only post the decent stuff...if I am still allowed to comment to your journal.

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afina_shining November 27 2009, 22:33:29 UTC

-cough- didn't think of it yet....but it's a good idea!

lucianwolf November 27 2009, 20:57:46 UTC

Oh, jealousy and violence and wall!sex and god, yes!

Thank you.

afina_shining November 27 2009, 22:34:28 UTC

thnx god we have SeverusXD the inspiration behind those abovementioned XDDD