this was really sweet ...i loved the first 2 parts :X:X:X:X read them all today the last part was a little rushed ( for me at least) but still it's really beautiful
LOL no it wasn't XD i avtually took more time writing it than two previous althgether XD and it s much longer XD anyways all m yfics are just whim, spur of the moment, so i'm not taking anything serious with them XD thanks for reading XD
sorry ...I meant that the sex part was a little rushed, aoi was to eager for his first time with a man (sorry again..i can't seem to find the right words to explain myself). and for something written just in the spur of the moment this is really good, more than that. i really liked it (I'm just being a little too picky)
no it's okay to be picky. i'm picky too XD and i'm not saying it's a masterpiece. but i will defende my work. it's my first time writing smut for fuck's sake! i warned everyone btw XDD and my first three-shot.
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the last part was a little rushed ( for me at least) but still it's really beautiful
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s much longer XD
anyways all m yfics are just whim, spur of the moment, so i'm not taking anything serious with them XD
thanks for reading XD
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and for something written just in the spur of the moment this is really good, more than that. i really liked it (I'm just being a little too picky)
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