Comments | afina_shining: Stranger Than Fiction- 1\?-Aoi\Uruha

afina_shining

Stranger Than Fiction- 1\?-Aoi\Uruha

Jul 03, 2009 18:12

( chapter 1 )

fanfiction, aoixuruha

Comments 47

v_meilie July 3 2009, 13:44:26 UTC

This is interesting ...

More, please ...

Thank u

afina_shining July 3 2009, 13:48:41 UTC

thanks for commenting XD btw did u know u clould be a co-writer? eiga_risti adviced you to me XD though it was a while ago XD

cherryrazor July 3 2009, 15:34:01 UTC

Wow! Grumpy Aoi in the morning~! xDDD
I'm not a morning person either so I get where he's coming from.
And I get his writer's block too.
*wouldn't mind Uruha helping her out with hers as well* xDD

This seems really interesting so please continue ^^

afina_shining July 3 2009, 16:00:50 UTC

i'm not a morning person too, we have a lot in common, though i wish writer's block wasnt one of them.XD thanks! i'll try my best!

kawasakininja July 3 2009, 19:47:56 UTC

Interesting beginning, I liked Yuu's characterization (btw you have one Aoi instead of Yuu in fic) of antisocial writer with a dirty sense of humor. He is plagued by a lot of things it seems, you mentioned betrayal. It seems like Uruha will have his hands full with him.

afina_shining July 3 2009, 21:18:02 UTC

welll by now he's Yuu, it's not a mistake he'll be Aoi soon. thanks for commennting! uruha indeed got a tough case XDD

kawasakininja July 4 2009, 08:10:06 UTC

Oh, I feel silly now because of my mistake. I found the sudden mention of the name Aoi so out of place there that I thought you missed something.

afina_shining July 4 2009, 10:16:54 UTC

well i just forgot to add (YuuxKouyou) in the sybject line, that was allXD but it's okay, my mistake.

n3uromanc3r July 3 2009, 21:24:48 UTC

I already like it so much!
It's really amusing!

I like Yuu's abrupt personality!
I can understand his fury because I also can't imagine how this whole consultant-thing should work in this special case.

Maybe the emphasis isn't on the professional help but on a constant presence of someone, and if this person is able to raise new feelings - no matter it's bad or good -, it could help, since I think Yuu likes to avoid other people as much as he can.

I'm so curious how will you continue the story!
Please update soon, this ending was a little cruel, Kouyou couldn't even end his sentence before Yuu rudely locked him out!

afina_shining July 4 2009, 00:56:26 UTC

hehehe i'm glad you liked it XD thanks for commenting XD

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afina_shining July 4 2009, 00:52:53 UTC

hehe if i knew what it will be like, i'd gladly tell you. but i still have no idea. things tend to turn out unexpectedly with my writing.