Uruha!!! Priceless! It seems that Aoi already knows his every disturbing habit very well! Beyoncé! XDDDD
Awww he was so cute when Uruha noticed the huge mess in the study! I think it was Aoi's first civilized sentence towards Uruha! And it seems Uruha doesn't want to leave yet!
Awwwwwwwwwwww, loved the chapter! I was afraid Aoi wouldn't write to keep Uruha with him, but I hope they'll find a solution soon...°w° I like the story so far, they're cute *spread hearts everywhere
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nonononon tell me MORE!!!! aoi's 'shirt' i mean whatever see-through thing he wears... i SO wish to see it with my own eyes. where were they playing? a small club or a big hall? crowded much? were you close to the stage or far? ZOMG if i ever make it to their live i probably would be in Saitama in the very back and won't see any shit...-cries- I WANNA SEE THEM UP CLOSE!!!
I'm so sorry this is so late. X_X anywaysss.... THE PLOT THICKENS! I'm really curious. I liked how you portray uruha in this chapter. for aoi, i felt that, the part where he messed up the room to search for the piece of paper with the plot on it a tad bit rushed. well, that's how i felt..the emotions, weren't as there as the other scenes in the story. but i really like when he was in the park and heard the mother called her daughter. that was really sweet.. the ending is full of suspense...i liked the way you ended it..with the way the situation dawned on uruha...there's this heavy tension there. me like~~ (:
about the study scene.. yup i just couldn't write it better... couldn't find words and didn't think it was important enough...or important at all XD though now i know my bad and can do better next time! thanks! uruha? i thought this chapter is more about aoi XDDD see you in the next chapter hopefully! and yes the tension is there and i have to write next chapter to make up everything.
They are getting quite used to each other, it is interesting how quickly this is happening. Yuu was funny, looking for Uruha around the house. He seems to have an interesting or better said unfortunate past. Wonder what will Uruha discover. I liked the way Aoi thought about Uruha, the fact that Uruha was such an honest person. He seen to have gotten his inspiration back as well. Uruha thoughts in the end were very interesting. Could it really be he doesn't want to leave.
hehe your not using '?' made me confused at first LOL XD off course he doesn't wanna leave!!! aoi is so cute who could resist?? and uhmm it won't be that fast in the upcoming chapters bcuz i have a long story about Yuu to tell and their relationship and shit... and i'm writing pretty slowly so i honestly don't know when we get to the main point XD
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Awww he was so cute when Uruha noticed the huge mess in the study! I think it was Aoi's first civilized sentence towards Uruha!
And it seems Uruha doesn't want to leave yet!
Please update soon!
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Gonna read tonight after the Osaka concert *w*
*giggles* I guess this will be a nice chapter, as always *w*
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aoi's 'shirt' i mean whatever see-through thing he wears... i SO wish to see it with my own eyes. where were they playing? a small club or a big hall? crowded much? were you close to the stage or far? ZOMG if i ever make it to their live i probably would be in Saitama in the very back and won't see any shit...-cries- I WANNA SEE THEM UP CLOSE!!!
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anywaysss....
THE PLOT THICKENS!
I'm really curious. I liked how you portray uruha in this chapter. for aoi, i felt that, the part where he messed up the room to search for the piece of paper with the plot on it a tad bit rushed. well, that's how i felt..the emotions, weren't as there as the other scenes in the story. but i really like when he was in the park and heard the mother called her daughter. that was really sweet..
the ending is full of suspense...i liked the way you ended it..with the way the situation dawned on uruha...there's this heavy tension there. me like~~ (:
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uruha? i thought this chapter is more about aoi XDDD see you in the next chapter hopefully!
and yes the tension is there and i have to write next chapter to make up everything.
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off course he doesn't wanna leave!!! aoi is so cute who could resist?? and uhmm it won't be that fast in the upcoming chapters bcuz i have a long story about Yuu to tell and their relationship and shit... and i'm writing pretty slowly so i honestly don't know when we get to the main point XD
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