Draft of an addition to my website

Jan 09, 2011 21:39

This is a draft of text I'm planning to add to my "About Metals" info on my website. I think it's valuable information, and while I've included some self-promotional stuff, I've tried to low-key that.

Thoughts?

Differences between Casting and Fabrication of MetalsBoth fabrication (making jewelry out of mill goods like wire and sheet) and casting ( Read more... )

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fub January 10 2011, 08:53:15 UTC
I like this. It's very informative, and it shows that you care about the quality of the things you produce -- hence the fabrication. Maybe you could also more explicitly point out the price difference between the two: not only is casting less work, but since the result is also lighter, there's more of the metal in the fabricated piece.

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medvssa January 10 2011, 11:55:11 UTC
I think it is very good and informative!

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metalrabbit January 10 2011, 18:44:24 UTC
Looks good - there is nothing wrong with a little self promotion especially regarding the quality of your work. Maybe it would be good to use phrase like "traditional hand skills" or something similar to emphasise the unique nature of each piece? Still, it's very good and gets the point across.

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zudapack April 13 2011, 17:01:54 UTC
Couldnt agree more with that, very attractive article

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