My attempt to write a haiku about ice-cream obviously ate a few too many big macs

Apr 26, 2010 23:23

Sugar Fireworks

Vanilla feathers scooped freezer-fresh,
This silver spoon daintily gloved.
Milk armies flutter weakly against weary buds before the
Chocolate chips spin their arrow somersaults,
Baffling fluorescent dances dripping with sweetness.
Always a battle, never a fusion, or perhaps my tongue, numbed
With countless of both, can no longer tell.

poetry, ice-cream

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Haiku Response marmaladefever April 26 2010, 16:36:47 UTC
My mouth, watering
Finds it wants, no, needs, ice cream
Give me some, now please!

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Re: Haiku Response afortunatefall April 29 2010, 10:41:57 UTC
*gives virtual ice cream*
It's cookies and cream! I hope you like it! =P

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