Fic: it's such a good day (maybe i'll stay) (part 2 of 2)

[afrakaday]

Here's part 2 to it's such a good day (maybe i'll stay).

Are you listening to marzipanilla's FANMIX? Because you should be. (All cut lines courtesy of fanmix lyrics!)

Comments

[little_ruby]

I....gods...at first it was this perfect smut story, with even a little bit of fluff in it. and I realy enjoyed it. and then this ending. and I'm all in tears because it's so perfect. and heartbreaking.

[afrakaday]

Hee, I love your icon! Yes, there was a bit of a bait-and-switch with the smutty fluff followed by the angst-fest. Thanks so much for reading and your kind feedback.

[larsfarm77]

Wow. I feel like the floor fell right out from under me. My heart's in pieces, but I love that they had that time, that she had that comfort, that those beautiful moments are his memories of her. Amazing fic, I'll say it again :).

[afrakaday]

Thanks so very much. It was tough to write such a sad ending!

[lanalucy]

I read this over on AO3, but thought I'd come here to comment.

I love that she took the one day and made it last. It's so heart-rending that Bill didn't know it was over until after it already was.

[afrakaday]

You are awesome for reading and commenting on this. I know elder!Adama smut is not exactly your favorite. ;)

Bill didn't know it was over until after it already was.
I love how you put that! Poor guy.

[lanalucy]

I just read with one hand sort of covering my eyes until that part's over. lol It's getting less....whatever it is. :)

[afrakaday]

LOL!!! Accept it! Embrace it! :D

[beekles]

Sniffles- doh- I just didn't see the heartbreak coming at all.
Loved the hot smut of part one and bittersweet ending of part two.
A real smashing read. Many thanks for sharing

[afrakaday]

Thanks so much for reading! So glad you enjoyed. :)

[triplesnap]

Ok, so, yeah, I knew it was coming, but I was maybe holding out a little hope that things would turn out differently.

Beautifully written, even if you did break my heart. :-)

[afrakaday]

Thank you! Sorry for the heartbreak. They can't help it. :)