Comments | afterphase: Fixation: Chapter 1

afterphase

Fixation: Chapter 1

Nov 08, 2008 20:39

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Title: Fixation

Author: EverScorpio

Characters/Pairing: Edward/Bella

Rating: M

Category: Romance/Angst

Spoilers: Canon up until New Moon, ( Read more... )

edward cullen, fanfiction, new moon, bella swan, au, twilight

Comments 14

comeseekme November 9 2008, 04:26:45 UTC

Absolutely loved it. I'm hooked!

afterphase November 9 2008, 04:31:51 UTC

Thanks Jessica :)

It was going to be longer, but I thought I'd leave it there.

babykitty095 November 9 2008, 04:52:58 UTC

holy moly!!! that was... that was something. something AMAZING!!! plz right more right away. cant wait till i read the next chapter

afterphase November 9 2008, 04:55:00 UTC

:D thanks for your nice comment. I plan on getting the next chapter up soon!

angelus_buff November 9 2008, 05:22:26 UTC

YAY CHRIS!! Getting the comments already, GO YOU!! LOL

You know I'm enjoying it, and I can't wait to read more either. Keep it coming! :D

~Cat~

afterphase November 9 2008, 05:24:11 UTC

I still love your icon!! And thanks too :D You're my inspiration ^^

angelus_buff November 9 2008, 06:05:11 UTC

Thanks, I'm rather fond of it right now too. Thanks gotta go to bre2004 for making me watch the Decode vid though. That's what made me have to make it. It's HOT! and totally *squee* worthy. LOL

And awwww.... I'm someone's inspiration, how cool! LOL

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afterphase November 9 2008, 05:33:45 UTC

Wow.. I really wasn't expecting many responses. Thanks :)

I thought it would be best to include Jasper's POV, especially since he is going to play a very important role ;D

fuzzyluvbanana November 9 2008, 08:44:31 UTC

damnit! why must you people write such amazing fic?!? i'm very excited to see where this is going. the suspense of them trying to find Victoria & Bella is just...oooo! hehe. i swear i am a masochist or something b/c fics about Edward leaving Bella and then the whole getting back together process are my favorite (lately)....and i loved this line:

I could have sworn his icy hands were running down my back because of the pulsing shivers that I was feeling. His words were colder than his pale white hands, hitting me deep. I had tried so much to be wrapped up in his world, every aspect of it. I tried so hard to be something that I clearly wasn't, just so I could stay with him.

so powerful! excellent job and i can't wait for the next installment.

afterphase November 10 2008, 04:00:16 UTC

Ha! I try I try.

I really wasn't sure on a plot setting but after re-reading bits of New Moon I knew I had to write this. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!