Comments | ag_sasami: Burn Out Bright (2/?)

ag_sasami

Burn Out Bright (2/?)

May 28, 2010 23:57

fanfiction: hinabn, fandom: hanna is not a boy's name

Comments 9

wannaseemymask May 29 2010, 04:21:38 UTC

I like this little piece a lot. <3 The idea of those staples tugging at his skin when he breathes too deep.... **Shudders** Great work.

snapeophilia May 29 2010, 04:25:02 UTC

XD You're quickly becoming my favorite. I love the little glimpses into Hanna's head.

crystal_chan June 2 2010, 14:08:02 UTC

Guh, this continues to be fantastic. The description of the staples digging into Hanna's skin is just perfect, gah. Fantastic job!

ag_sasami June 2 2010, 22:06:15 UTC

So I really love your stories, and it makes me sort of unnecessarily happy that you're enjoying these...haha :D I'm working on two others right now that I had hoped to post already, but they don't feel quite right yet.

crystal_chan June 2 2010, 22:28:35 UTC

Oh, um, wow, thank you. XD I really love your stuff, so you saying you love mine is a huge compliment.

And good luck with the others!

ag_sasami June 3 2010, 02:36:18 UTC

Haha, I think we just had a moment. :p

never_will June 3 2010, 02:34:29 UTC

I think I love you. I really like the idea of that scar hurting, because it really doesn't look healed at all, and industrial staples in your chest can't feel good.

PS: At the end there, are those song lyrics, and if so, what from?

ag_sasami June 3 2010, 02:44:42 UTC

Right, I mean how could it not hurt?! And thank you! The song is Burn Out Bright by Switchfoot.

never_will June 3 2010, 02:45:39 UTC

I have to admit, anything that involves causing people pain is going to be A-Okay by me. I'm kind of a jerk like that.

Awesome, thanks.