[ OnKey ] Sunbeams on Snow ( Part 2/3 )

Dec 31, 2009 13:17

Title: Sunbeams on Snow (2/3)
Rating: R/NC-17
Word Count: ~4,800
Pairing: Onew x Key
Genre: Drama, romance
Warnings: Cursing and somewhat explicit sex
Summary: High School AU. Jinki and Kibum were the last two people the world expected to see together.
Notes: Thanks for all the positive reviews, everyone! Please enjoy this chapter as well. :) One part ( Read more... )

genre: romance, genre: drama, fandom: shinee, pairing: onew x key

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skytears9 December 31 2009, 23:03:28 UTC
as;ldk This was just both adorable and heartaching. And I love it. ♥

Can't wait for the last part! ^^

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agapic January 1 2010, 01:55:02 UTC
Thank you for the review!! :) I'm glad you loved it.

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maybegoodbye December 31 2009, 23:35:21 UTC
This story is just so cute <3
Jinki's oblivious innocent nature just makes me smile and want to hit him at the same time. Not to mention Kibum's bossy direct nature makes me laugh.

A nice pairing, ne? xD

Anyways I enjoy your style of writing, its easy to follow and flows nicely. Great job you certainly make me a tad envious that's for sure~

Update soon? ;o;

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agapic January 1 2010, 01:55:51 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And hah, they both are just too cute sometimes ♥

Thanks for the review!

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rikli December 31 2009, 23:51:10 UTC
ahh, i love your writing *_*;;

i want ask what will happen next cuz i saw you wouldn't tell anyone, haha XD but that's good, good, i'm waiting for a surprise... a NICE one XD

<3

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agapic January 1 2010, 01:56:33 UTC
Thank you! And lol, I'll post the next chapter up sometime in the near future, methinks. I have two Jongkey things in the works right now :D

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xxqod January 1 2010, 01:33:18 UTC
Oh this!
The happy feeling of them working on the project together,
and I really thought Key was going to seduce him in Jinki's room. But Jinki saved himself XD
Walking Key home and the kiss were so romantic!
and seriously, when Jinki went to Key's apartment XD
I really like the way Kibum is so seductive XD
Felt like they really love each other, but now Key disappeared T.T
I hope Taemin isn't right, or that he was but Kibum changed.
<3 ~~

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agapic January 1 2010, 01:57:21 UTC
Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I did enjoy writing the kiss scene the best, and I'm the most satisfied with it, too. I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for the review! ♥

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agapic January 1 2010, 01:58:49 UTC
Key's a complicated girl. /listening to RDD for the 23587485th time

It'll all be resolved in the next chapter though~

Thanks reviewing again!! :)

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