[JaeHo] Dangerous Game

Oct 12, 2008 02:38

Title: Dangerous Game ( Read more... )

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shinhwoo October 12 2008, 02:10:44 UTC
wah~ so good^^
i love how they're both kinda dominant in this fic~
jae is not as much of a chick as everyone thinks XD
haha, anyway, this was really awesome~ i could feel the danger^^
haha, well.....thx!
<3

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age_of_dreams October 12 2008, 11:03:51 UTC
Yay, thanks for pointing that out! *o* I didn't want to make any of them "submissive", so I'm really happy you caught (and liked) that ♥

And yeah, Jae's definitely not a chick ;D

Thank you very much for eading and commenting! x33

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chloe1910 October 12 2008, 02:40:40 UTC
Jaeho cell!pron pwns! That was sexily dangerous...rawr!

ooh..Dangerous Jae is truly sexy here...Damn straight..no one could call Jae a fag and walked away in one piece, lol! Love his feistyness...

I think the theory where wild(bad) man, always attracts woman is true....Well, Yunho is definately no woman..but I guess it applicable here too <3333!!

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age_of_dreams October 12 2008, 11:00:36 UTC
I had been itching to write prison!smut since I saw Jae roped to the wall in the mirotic PV XDDD It took me a while but I made it XDv

Mmmmmh, I love feisty!Jae. He's very hot to write *O*

(ahahahahahah, that last line made me lol so much! XD ♥♥♥)

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you finished it! \o/ already October 12 2008, 02:43:27 UTC
and I LOVE IT.

it's so raw and sensual and damn i love your characterization in this. jaejoong is so wild and fierce. and that bit about yunho taking over control made me smile in triumph :D

the whole banter throughout the sex was A+, and you managed to put humor in between the scenes that's supposed to be dark. the snark was amusing to read.

and i lovelovelove the ending, you satisfy the fluffy side in me. i'm such a sucker for good endings x))

He’s almost scared at how caring it sounds, nothing like the paternalistic shit guards give inmates all the time; and he sees Jaejoong’s eyes widen a little, then soften, then go back to their usual sly and calculating look.
PERFECT ♥

*adds to mem* ugh i love it, will reread again. thanks for this Hoshi x)♥♥♥♥

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Re: you finished it! \o/ crux_australis October 12 2008, 11:31:29 UTC
igskljskjhls Went for short hols in Sydney and came back to this. ♥ Jaejoong is a beautiful man. Mrgph~ And you are beautiful for emphasizing that. He has a huge penis and amazing muscles and broad shoulders and a deep voice and gjslghshga being Yunho-sexual doesn't make him a sissy girl. xD

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Re: you finished it! \o/ crux_australis October 12 2008, 11:32:33 UTC
DAMN IT! Replied on wrong area wtf dlhkdlhd D:

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Re: you finished it! \o/ age_of_dreams October 12 2008, 12:27:19 UTC
Hello :D Welcome back ♥

Yeah, Jaejoong is most definitely a man (as beautiful as he is), and I'll never get tired of emphasizing it XDD Someone has to do it, after all =.=;

Agreed on everything. Especially on the huge penis ;P

ahahaha and don't worry about the comment, I've replied in the wrong place several times too xDDD

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moon1084 October 12 2008, 06:38:40 UTC
this was so damn smexicilous daaaamn! so dangerous and sexy ahhhh amazing. *goes to add to memories*

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age_of_dreams October 12 2008, 10:57:33 UTC
=DDDDDDDDDDD Glad you enjoyed!!! ;D♥

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coolplastic19 October 12 2008, 06:41:47 UTC
"There's nothing soft about him, nothing submissive nor pliant even when he's like this, tied up and apparently powerless in front of Yunho."

this was amazing! I'm usually not a fan of YunJae, but this one just takes the cake. I loved the raw and masculine feel of it, and the writing and descriptions were superb! <333

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age_of_dreams October 12 2008, 10:56:14 UTC
*flails* I'm so glad you liked it *________*♥♥♥♥
It's always awesome when someone who's not a Yunjae fan comments to my fics *O*

And yeah, raw and masculine was what I was going for ;P Also because I'm not a fan of weak/girly!Jae (obviously xD)

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

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