wah~ so good^^ i love how they're both kinda dominant in this fic~ jae is not as much of a chick as everyone thinks XD haha, anyway, this was really awesome~ i could feel the danger^^ haha, well.....thx! <3
Jaeho cell!pron pwns! That was sexily dangerous...rawr!
ooh..Dangerous Jae is truly sexy here...Damn straight..no one could call Jae a fag and walked away in one piece, lol! Love his feistyness...
I think the theory where wild(bad) man, always attracts woman is true....Well, Yunho is definately no woman..but I guess it applicable here too <3333!!
you finished it! \o/alreadyOctober 12 2008, 02:43:27 UTC
and I LOVE IT.
it's so raw and sensual and damn i love your characterization in this. jaejoong is so wild and fierce. and that bit about yunho taking over control made me smile in triumph :D
the whole banter throughout the sex was A+, and you managed to put humor in between the scenes that's supposed to be dark. the snark was amusing to read.
and i lovelovelove the ending, you satisfy the fluffy side in me. i'm such a sucker for good endings x))
He’s almost scared at how caring it sounds, nothing like the paternalistic shit guards give inmates all the time; and he sees Jaejoong’s eyes widen a little, then soften, then go back to their usual sly and calculating look. PERFECT ♥
*adds to mem* ugh i love it, will reread again. thanks for this Hoshi x)♥♥♥♥
Re: you finished it! \o/crux_australisOctober 12 2008, 11:31:29 UTC
igskljskjhls Went for short hols in Sydney and came back to this. ♥ Jaejoong is a beautiful man. Mrgph~ And you are beautiful for emphasizing that. He has a huge penis and amazing muscles and broad shoulders and a deep voice and gjslghshga being Yunho-sexual doesn't make him a sissy girl. xD
"There's nothing soft about him, nothing submissive nor pliant even when he's like this, tied up and apparently powerless in front of Yunho."
this was amazing! I'm usually not a fan of YunJae, but this one just takes the cake. I loved the raw and masculine feel of it, and the writing and descriptions were superb! <333
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i love how they're both kinda dominant in this fic~
jae is not as much of a chick as everyone thinks XD
haha, anyway, this was really awesome~ i could feel the danger^^
haha, well.....thx!
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And yeah, Jae's definitely not a chick ;D
Thank you very much for eading and commenting! x33
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ooh..Dangerous Jae is truly sexy here...Damn straight..no one could call Jae a fag and walked away in one piece, lol! Love his feistyness...
I think the theory where wild(bad) man, always attracts woman is true....Well, Yunho is definately no woman..but I guess it applicable here too <3333!!
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Mmmmmh, I love feisty!Jae. He's very hot to write *O*
(ahahahahahah, that last line made me lol so much! XD ♥♥♥)
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it's so raw and sensual and damn i love your characterization in this. jaejoong is so wild and fierce. and that bit about yunho taking over control made me smile in triumph :D
the whole banter throughout the sex was A+, and you managed to put humor in between the scenes that's supposed to be dark. the snark was amusing to read.
and i lovelovelove the ending, you satisfy the fluffy side in me. i'm such a sucker for good endings x))
He’s almost scared at how caring it sounds, nothing like the paternalistic shit guards give inmates all the time; and he sees Jaejoong’s eyes widen a little, then soften, then go back to their usual sly and calculating look.
PERFECT ♥
*adds to mem* ugh i love it, will reread again. thanks for this Hoshi x)♥♥♥♥
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Yeah, Jaejoong is most definitely a man (as beautiful as he is), and I'll never get tired of emphasizing it XDD Someone has to do it, after all =.=;
Agreed on everything. Especially on the huge penis ;P
ahahaha and don't worry about the comment, I've replied in the wrong place several times too xDDD
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this was amazing! I'm usually not a fan of YunJae, but this one just takes the cake. I loved the raw and masculine feel of it, and the writing and descriptions were superb! <333
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It's always awesome when someone who's not a Yunjae fan comments to my fics *O*
And yeah, raw and masculine was what I was going for ;P Also because I'm not a fan of weak/girly!Jae (obviously xD)
Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥
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