[JaeHo] Bridge Over Troubled Water

[age_of_dreams]

Title: Bridge Over Troubled Water

Pairing(s): JaeHo
Length: One-shot
Word count: 2600~
Rating: B for blowjob R

Comments

[dreamrainydays]

Bonus part = YAY
And also, you work that pre-established relationship. And angsty!ciggie-in-hand!Jae is hot.
And also, yes for having the same kinks. BRING BACK THE BELLYBAR.

'Jaejoong stirs and nuzzles his face against Yunho's shirt like a kitten' - c'mere, sexkitten!jae. please. pleasepleasepleaseplease. ...please?

'“Yunho, stop,” he whispers quickly, looking uncharacteristically flustered, “it's not... I mean, you don't have to do this just to make me feel better. Comfort sex and all that jazz.”' - and flustered too. The mental images alone are like WOAH. I am curling my toes and crossing my legs.

'Jaejoong presses the butt into the ashtray - almost filled to the brim, Yunho notices with concern - and reaches for the lighter and another cigarette.

“Fuck,” he hisses, crushing the empty pack in his fist with a sudden vehemence that startles Yunho; he feels around for a new one on the small table and curses under his breath when he finds none.' and this is my favourite part, just for the awesome portrayal of emotions there.

[oh_thexirony]

I think I have said how much I like your fics before.

This one is no exception ^^ <3

[age_of_dreams]

Thank you very much!! ♥

[age_of_dreams]

:D♥

angsty!ciggie-in-hand!Jae is interesting to write. But again, any jae is interesting to write <.<;

Sexykitten Jae with a bellybar jfhsfgasfgsfg *o* Don't make me think of it omfg 8D

...I am amused that you find flustered Jae so arousing 8DDD *writes it down to use it agains you* >=DD

I'm glad you like that part :D I had trouble making him sound realistic, there D8

Thank you for the comment, Naomi. It means more than you think. ♥

[jirurukyungmi]

I so love this one! :3
Short/long?
Just perfect <33

[age_of_dreams]

:DDDD

Thank you for reading!!! ♥

[chunnie_fiera]

ahh!!!
so cute!!!
love!!!

[age_of_dreams]

X3333

Thank you! ♥

[orionsroad]

The inner sap (hell, who am I kidding, the outer part of me is a sap too. -_-) in me squealed a the 'bonus', and I do so love love love snarky Min and no-pants!Jae. XD

But oh, such lovely lovely bandfic you do bring to us. Thanks for making me smile. Here in the airport, where I really shouldn't be reading smut but couldn't resist when I saw it was you.

[age_of_dreams]

Snarky!Min is s funny to write hsdfasdsfa I really enjoy writing his parts XDD and who doesn't love no-pants!Jae? ;D

I'm really glad it made you smile :D♥

Thanks for reading, and have a safe trip!!!! X333

[314159]

*___________* This was so sweet and such a lovely thing to see on Christmas! Yunho is so gentle and sweet and I really do worry about poor over-worked Jaejoong sometimes. Merry Xmas to you too!

Also, I think you forgot to close an italics tag towards the end, just so you know haha

[age_of_dreams]

:DDDD

Thank you, I'm glad you liked this :3♥♥♥ (I worry about him too u.u)

Yeah, I fixed it now. XD Thanks!