more ....... help?

[agent_speckle]

*bypasses angst and gets to the point* I feel very uncomfortable with any/all marks I make on a paper currently, so I'm posting stuff for advice. I'm sure there's a lot of anatomy problems on this, but please don't point them out because I can't fix them at this point. TT___TT I need cropping advice or color advice or ... something............

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Comments

[trocke]

I'd go with the first crop, just for the extra sky around the character. It seems to "center" her very well, if that makes sense. Plus the third cropping has more white birds, whereas the third crop appears to feature a showdown between the two up front (is that intentional?)

*votes for first*

[agent_speckle]

XDDDD you make me want to make it intentional. third version edits: "BRING IT ON, BITCH!" "YOU GOIN' DOWN, YO."

[trocke]

"I will peck at your black heart with the purity of a thousand doves commemorating the first snowflake to touch a baby's nose!"

"MY UGLINESS IS MY STRENGTH CAWWWW"

(ugly in comparison to doves, of course, not through any illustrating of yours)

[purple_fiction]

My money's on the crow. :-D

[schwartzkauz]

1st I think, but 2nd for composition though it seems a tad weaker...third is too squished.

GAH you're so damn good with watercolor/traditional/everything wtf. XDDD <3

[purple_fiction]

That's stunning. Wow. Your artwork always draw me right in. And I love the colors.

I'd cast my vote for the first version. Since I'm not a visual artist, I have no good reasons for it. Just, having looked at all three of them, that one feels right.

[cetriya]

I like the 1st and 2nd. I'd say, fad the hair more into the black for a more mysterious affect?

[theywerecones]

I don't know anything about composition, but I immediately was drawn to the first. I like it most! *passes out*