Sketch 042 - crits please

Nov 06, 2008 22:04


Someone can't draw people in even slight perspectiiiiive............. actually, honestly, I used to be alright at it, but I'm very rusty. T_T; It's been many months since I've drawn as much as I wanna. [circumstances. you know.] Buuut... anyway. Trying to get sharp at it again. Help pls. I really want it to look alright. I've been reading millions ( Read more... )

sketchblog, yuri, red river, ishtar, watercolor, fanart

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agent_speckle November 7 2008, 05:05:11 UTC
yeah ... everything bellow the hips: fuck that. I dont even know why humans have legs.

Others have left comments regarding this awful anatomy phenomena ~ maybe their comments will help you formulate the wording?

Yeah, Red River is pretty awesome. O_O Mainly it's just told really well, there's never a boring volume. Eventually Kail and Yuri kind of drift apart geographically, thus solving the problem of Yuri becoming some sort of helpless lame ass. Although it makes me sad, because sex is a happy affair and when Kail and Yuri are far apart, there is less sex. ... Although it does not at all impact the number of near-rapings.

email: lilindar at gmail.com : D should be the same as... ever. always. I think. Sorry if it's broken. O_o I post my email on my online accounts, btw. like DA. You worry me. What is this email about?

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agent_speckle November 7 2008, 06:46:22 UTC
Not only do they eventually get around to "doing it", but once the deed is done they do it as often as it can be fit into the plot. XD Nuthen gets show'd though, but that's alright, porn is bountiful elsewhere.

lol hotmail. i've not signed into that thing since I was like ... 15. or something.

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stalechips November 7 2008, 03:41:20 UTC
Head's too big, and if you're gonna draw a jungle woman with defined arms youre gonna wanna give her wide hips and maybe some muscular thighs to balance things out and keep her looking like a woman.

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megalodon823 November 7 2008, 03:42:04 UTC
I would say to thicken up the torso/hips area. They would be foreshortened, so they'd be slightly stacked on one another, but they wouldn't get that much skinnier. (From what I can see the perspective isn't that skewed, as the legs aren't vanishing away.) I would perhaps recommend keeping the very bottoms of her legs the same width, but increasing the general width of her whole body as it goes upwards from there, legs and torso. Then by the time you get to the top of the chest, they would match the shoulders and arms and head. I realize the waist needs to nip in at some point, but I'd widen all the forms first, then cinch in a bit once everything's broader.

Er, make sense? Wish I could sketch what I mean... Hope that was in any way helpful. I like the way you drew the folds in the cloth. It looks great pretty much in every way but the proprtions.

Good luck!

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fyirechilde November 7 2008, 03:48:35 UTC
i know this character she's thin and small, she would not have body builder upper torso and no hips... Slimline her down and make her hips just slightly smaller than the shoulders in perspective...as i recall her body type was almost equal hip/shoulder with a long thin waist?

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