Comments | agent_sydney: Fic: Sparky

agent_sydney

Fic: Sparky - Touch

Feb 02, 2006 15:15

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fic, sga

Comments 8

_atmospheric February 1 2006, 21:17:30 UTC

Squeee! I love the imagery this has- perfect.

agent_sydney February 1 2006, 22:23:01 UTC

Thanks!

dark_cygnet February 2 2006, 00:07:51 UTC

Nice job with the imagery. i liked this alot. The only thing i noticed was this...

No one else tares at her so completely.

I think you want tears instead.

Great job, thanks for sharing.

agent_sydney February 2 2006, 02:33:10 UTC

:D You're welcome!

Thanks for the correction!

vickysg1 February 2 2006, 00:41:23 UTC

Sweet!!

agent_sydney February 2 2006, 01:30:43 UTC

Thanks very much!

liliumscribe February 2 2006, 01:52:53 UTC

Very poetic... Erotic without being overdone... Strangely poignant.

agent_sydney February 2 2006, 02:34:58 UTC

Wow, thank you!