Fic: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 4: Tiptoe

[agentb81]

Title:  Empire State of Mind - Chapter 4: Tiptoe
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: generally 15 - R (may reach NC-17 in some chapters)
Word Count: 7000
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not for-profit, it constitutes

Comments

[rigelinorion]

I never thought I'll say this but Kurt is sort of a hero to me for this chapter. And aww Santana was all emotional and wrought over seeing Britt being kissed. Well she needs to step up her game!

Loved cheeky fearless Britt with her teasing, telling Santana she's sexy..and saying she would eat off Santana. Loved Santana's huh? reactions. Hee hee hee and then that quiet confession as Santana dozed in her arms. The picture (yes visualising every scene like it's a movie thanks to your beautiful detail and visual descriptions) of them cuddling together, Santana so unguarded and trusting in Britt's arms that she can rest in the middle of a busy hospital..

I need more interactions and dialogue and touching between the 2. I hope San's hand makes a quicker recovery than expected, she's a toughi but also coz I can't wait to see her cooking for Britt.

[agentb81]

Thank you so much. I can't tell you how much it means to read such words of encouragement, it always inspires me.

Kurt has surprised me a little too, but he is such a great character to have around in this situation and just what Santana needs in a friend.

Update has been posted, I hope it meets expectations!

[sneakyangel01]

Your story just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait to see where you take it from here :)

[agentb81]

Wait no longer, I've been quick with the update and posted the next chapter.

Thank you, those words mean so much to me. Not much pressure there either lol

[cabisorchard]

Hey, i just find the way to review your fics haha, im the crazy latina who is stalking you from Twitter. Remember the other time i told you that you were on my top favorite writers, well i just realize that the other one knows you, it's Lizzylizbian, you are the best ones, seriously, i enjoy so much your fics, i can't wait for your update :)
oh, it just came out on my mind that you 2 should write something together, like two stories maybe that can be related, i don't know something like that, it would be totally awesome!!!

Claudia
ps: sorry for the mistakes :/ you know english is not my native language.

[agentb81]

Well hello, nice to see you over here! Pleased you could comment, I really appreciate it. Thank you for reading and commenting and tweeting me, you always make me laugh!

Lizzy is awesome, its a true fact and her writing is a great inspiration :)

Now I know you are aware of the next chapter because you have already tweeted me :)

[ducksticks]

I love this fic because its so good and nice and easy going to read. Really, I love it. Those Britt's sexy one liners to Santana were so hot... I would have cut my hand too xD

Awww poor Mike being in love with Britt-Britt...
Well, who can resist her charmings. Just get him a girl *cofQuinncof* and make him happy too =P

Keep writing!

[agentb81]

Aw thanks, I'm pleased you like it. Yes, Brittnay is a bit of a distraction for Santana.

Lol Quinn is kinda with Sam at the moment in the fic, but you know anything can happen.

Update has been posted, so enjoy :)

[ducksticks]

Oh yeah, I forgot Quinn is with Sam now and that Mike is going on tour soon. Well, it was good to see him in a little cameo tho =)