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Fic: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 5: Entwined

Aug 15, 2011 23:59

Title: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 5: Entwined
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: generally 15 - R (may reach NC-17 in some chapters)
Word Count: 3500
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not for-profit, it ( Read more... )

esom, brittana, brittany/santana, fanfiction, glee

Comments 26

lizzylizbian August 16 2011, 00:17:02 UTC

i just read through this uber fast, and omg... i'm freaking squealing that you reconsidered. unfortunately i can't leave the response that i want because i'm doing a late dinner. but love this. will give a longer, more detailed comment in the next few hours. xoxo

lizzylizbian August 16 2011, 02:05:37 UTC

ok, i'm home and i'm at my computer which means it's long comment time. but first, let me preface this by saying i've had a few glasses of wine and i'm more in a drunk!santana mood than a drunk!brittany mood ;D ( ... )

agentb81 August 17 2011, 19:25:58 UTC

Hmm what can I say to this? Really?

I thought long and hard about what you said and you were right, the theme of the play - made total sense, the eyes - same again, they both kind of knitted it all together and made it work and to you my dear, I am eternally grateful. Then your final comment in the email, got me thinking again. Hence that new addition and it's thanks to you. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it too, I was nervous about adding the kiss and if the writing would blend with the rest of the chapter.

Should have guessed you'd go down the angsty sex route if you had written lol. But you know me and my emotions and feelings :D

I can't thank you enough, my wonderful beta and instrument of inspiration :)

aleqkiemonster August 16 2011, 00:22:28 UTC

Update so soon! Awesome :O now I'll read lol I just wanted to express my excitement for the update.

agentb81 August 17 2011, 19:26:39 UTC

Lol, I love how you comment before reading, dare to be different :)

wkgreen August 16 2011, 00:45:42 UTC

Awwwww... soooo sweet!

And now we see what it takes to get Santana to open up ;)

Waiting for more :)

agentb81 August 17 2011, 19:27:54 UTC

Thanking you my dear :)

Yes, Santana, a little mine field of emotions, finally opens up to Brittany!

sneakyangel01 August 16 2011, 16:43:28 UTC

Two updates in one week? You're spoiling us! This was a great chapter. That was the sweetest buildup to a kiss that I have ever read. Kudos

agentb81 August 17 2011, 19:29:32 UTC

I like to spoil my loyal friends occassionally and for once time was on my side!

I'm really pleased you liked it and thank you for reading and commenting :)

rigelinorion August 16 2011, 16:52:03 UTC

Hi, I worked all night yday so I'm not sure how long my comment will be as I'm getting really tired. Also, Lizzy really covered a lot of ground ( ... )

agentb81 August 17 2011, 19:34:26 UTC

I love your comment, particularly the last paragraph because you hit the nail on the head, it's totally what I was going for and am so pleased it was portrayed that way and that you enjoyed it. You're right, it's love, plain and simple.

Thank you for reading and for your detailed comment, I appreciate you taking the time to do so.