Fic: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 5: Entwined

[agentb81]

Title:  Empire State of Mind - Chapter 5: Entwined
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: generally 15 - R (may reach NC-17 in some chapters)
Word Count: 3500
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not for-profit, it

Comments

[ducksticks]

They kissed!!! Excuse me while I melt in my chair =P

That was so sweet, really sweet. Like no rushing things because they got at least 10 chapters ahead, right? =P

[agentb81]

They did, at last!

Thank you so much, if you know my writing then I don't rush things at all, I like a slow steady build up :)

[freakykaethe]

great update!
I loved how mesmerized Santana was by Brittanys performance and damn, the way you described it, just so beautiful! I love what you can do with words ;)

[agentb81]

Aw thank you. It's very humbling to read comments like yours :) I'm really pleased you're enjoying the fic!

[sbsonny]

This chapter was so good/satisfying! I really loved how there wasn't some big declaration of love or whatever, because there didn't need to be. The two understand each other on a level that made that sort of thing unnecessary, and understated was the way to go (and you pulled it off beautifully, might I add). I also loved the part where Santana worries about confusing Brittany with her character, because a large part of their relationship has been about seeing one another for who they truly are when no one else could. It shows how much Santana values what they have, just how special it is to her.
I just love it way too much lol.

[agentb81]

First of all, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, secondly, yes they're not really at the grand gesture/declaration stage and it's not really them. It's all about the two of them, what they have and what they are building and I'm so pleased to hear I'm pulling it off ok!