Fic: Back

[agentb81]

Title:  Back
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: R
Word Count: 2635
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not for-profit, it constitutes fair use. Use of other personalities is not a reflection of their real lives and is completely

Comments

[lizzylizbian]

oh, this was just all sorts of cuteness. i totally want this to happen on the show now. picnic at dusk. that unbelievable kiss. and the image of brittany cooking slays me every time. lol.

but shockingly the real winner was the end. san's mom! i die. and the banter back and forth was just fabulous. "Brittany forgetting to put the lid on the blender again or you defiling my counter top with your best friend?” i'm dying right now.

"Both stood questioningly, heads tilted to the same side, arms folded over their chests. 'Can you not do that? It scares me. I feel like I’m being stared at by scary Latina twins born 21 years apart.'" omg! too great.

so awesome to read this. <3 u.

[agentb81]

One day Brittany will surprise us all and cook up a master piece!

To me San's Mom is my hero, she gave birth to Santana so she has to be pretty cool and funny.

I'm so relieved and pleased that you like it and thank you for the comment and the humour appreciation :)

[relax_o_vision]

"We were doing homework." - oh, Santana. Oh sweet sweet Santana.

"Artie? What the hell were you thinking?" - Thank you! That really needed to be said!

That was truly awesome! Why can't Glee be like that?! A welcome distraction from my own fic and just what I needed to wake me up again!!!

I really enjoy your style. You're like my structure hero, if that makes sense.

<3

[agentb81]

Hmm, your review is a heart warmer, that's for sure, I can't thank you enough for such kind, sweet words.

The Artie thing? San's Mom is awesome, she sees things pretty much the same way Santana does - the apple didn't fall far from the tree.

I've never been called a structure hero, but thank you, huge compliment, I totally appreciate it :)

[jacs1010]

OK this was brilliant! Loved loved loved everything about this.
Loved the girls re-building their relationship and talking with feelings :) and the kiss.
Had to lol at the Artie comment and loved Santana's Mum :)

Please prety please with sugar on top you must continue more little one shots of the girls working their way through the rules.
:)

[agentb81]

Aw thanks, really pleased you liked it.

You will be pleased to hear that yes, I have continued, I have posted and I hope you like it!

And yeah, Santana's Mum, my hero :)

[rigelinorion]

Love that image of San bouncing over to britt all eager, really light and happy.

Aww and the gals cooking together? Too cute. Hee hee at adorable britt when left alone with batter and blender. Loved San returning and finding her mess and oops irresistible.

San's recovery line of "homework"..hilarious! Smooth ;)

And the kind mom, sniff, she's so lovely.

[jsword]

This was awesome and I love your version of Santana's mom. An older Santana is exactly how I imagine her to be. I have a feeling they're going to model Santana's family too much off of Quinn's though. :(

[agentb81]

@jsword Thank you so much. Eva's cool, Santana has to get her sassyness from somewhere right?

However they deal with Santana's family in Glee, it's always good to have fanfic, we can suit ourselves :)

[agentb81]

@rigelinorion - I do tend to go for the cute Brittana, I just hope I don't over do it!

'homework' is Santana's programmed answer, I believe that she's been asked so many times what she's been upto with Brittany in her room!

She's an awesome Mom, living in the 21st Century :)

And THANK YOU for reading and commenting :)

[startled_always]

Awww! so cute! So damn cute! Yes, this is what I'd like to see in S3, thank you very much Mr. Murphy! Take note!

This made me all cheery! =)

[agentb81]

Lol, thank you, not too cute? Never too cute. There you go I answered for you ;)

Yeah I want to see this too, highly doubt it, but nice to imagine, Glee can be quite serious sometimes so I wanted to keep this fic light and fun.

Thank you for always reading and commenting :)