Fic: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 7: Two Become One - Part 1

[agentb81]

Title:  Empire State of Mind - Chapter 7: Two Become One
Author: agentb81 & lizzylizbian
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10900
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not
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Comments

[lizzylizbian]

i just don't even have words... i mean, when you asked me to co-author this chapter with you i was like, "who me? :::looks around my empty room::: that's so sweet, but why?" and then i panicked because your fic is so descriptively fluffy. and then i started writing and writing and writing. then i panicked some more because... like what if it doesn't work together and can i really write something that emotional and fluffy

[agentb81]

Two words - yes you. Because I came up with this crazy idea of having a chapter where it was all about two's and one's and becomings and to have a collaboration piece just had to happen. And I chose you because I believed that you could do it, you would write something epic that just slotted in to this crazyness that is ESOM and I never imagined the results. I know it was stretching your boundaries but you did it so brilliantly and it fit so seamlessly into the rest of the chapter. It worked.

I'm proud of us too, but I don't think I deserve your pride. You deserve mine.

I'm really pleased it turned out the way it did and that you liked it so much, it's easily my favourite chapter too. You're comparison to watching a movie - best compliment ever.

Thank you whole heartedly. For everything.

<3 xxxx

[freakykaethe]

wow.. just WOW

[agentb81]

Hi, thank you for the epic comment, I really appreciate the effort! Before I continue I want to make sure you've read the second part of this chapter, the link is above the comments at the end of the post.

I'm pleased it's your favourite chapter, it's both mine and Lizzy's favourite too. I'm so honoured she agreed to write this with me and so happy you like it and the fact you would have thought it was written by one person is a massive compliment to both of us, particularly Lizzy because she was a little nervous about it! I totally get what you're saying and it's so lovely to read, so thank you so much :)

[freakykaethe]

omg so embarrassing! I seriously overlooked that link :X I think I was too amazed by the awesomeness of this!
Well.. now I'm happy all over again to read part 2 :D
Thanks :)

[agentb81]

lol, don't worry about it, thought I would point it out just in case ;) enjoy part 2!

[rigelinorion]

Well gals, I've been given a stack of cookbooks to occupy me at my friend's house when everyone else sleeps..I really want to read them but have I touched them? No..coz I'm rereading this and would rather review instead

[agentb81]

Oh my gosh, that's such a long comment. I commend you and thank you tremendously for taking the time to read it and write such a detailed comment

[aleqkiemonster]

Darn, two of my favorite authors on the same chapter! What a nice combo pack, and as always, the smut was perfect ;)

[agentb81]

Thank you very much, so pleased that you liked it and thanks for reading and commenting :)

[sgafirenity]

Okay, I have one more chapter and then I'm caught up but I had to stop and comment on this one because OMG that was incredibly hot. The way you describe it out, all the emotion they are feeling and just everything. Just wow. You blew me away with this chapter and not just because of the incredibly hot sex they had but because you put the focus on the emotion and not the act. Not many writers to do that, they usually put the focus on the thing and the emotion is secondary. Not that anything is wrong with that but this way is just so refreshing. It's like a new kind of reading. I like it.

Now I'm off to read the next chapter. :D