Comments | agentjedi: FIC: Steel - Vader, Leia

agentjedi

FIC: Steel - Vader, Leia - PG

Mar 04, 2006 22:57

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niicoly March 5 2006, 06:01:06 UTC

Striding down the long walkway, Vader gripped the hilt of his lightsabre out of habit. One of the stormtroopers finally got a good grip on the small intruder and lifted her up off the ground. She squealed and demanded, "Let me go, you-you-nerf herder ( ... )

starvinbohemian March 5 2006, 06:28:37 UTC

I second that comment above about Bail and Breha having a heartattack at having their daughter come face-to-face with Vader. Yikes. Actually, I think I'd freak if my child was being faced down by an evil overlord even if she wasn't his secret, potential-evil-weapon daughter. ;)

Anyway, well done. I'd love to see more!

mlledefer March 5 2006, 12:08:06 UTC

A good idea very well written! Thanks for sharing!!:)

imaginaryalice March 5 2006, 15:29:51 UTC

i love little Leia fic and i comletely agree with you that Vader and Leia clearly have a history in ANH. this was quite well written (simple sentences like this: Vader strode down the long dark hallway where Bail Organa still remained, apparently frozen in fear. just get me!) and i love the bit about the "two Leias". Anakin's so blind.

quietpoet317 March 5 2006, 17:50:04 UTC

Wonderful written!