Are you sure this is your first story? It's absolutely brilliant, nay, luminescent. I think you did an excellent job of keeping it spiritual and sensual while still maintaining the intensity we see between them in canon. Anakin's journey is fascinating, and I love how you build up the dichotomy between the love of the body and that of the soul, perhaps because I am a geek. :D The whole piece just feels very magical, with lots of "swoosh"-y sounds (or maybe that's just me). *is incoherent* Anyway, yes, please keep writing!
Actually, I've been writing since I was four or five years old. Of course, at that time, my stories consisted of "YQZXTUV? QRYXCPJQW!!!" (Loved the letters Q, W, X and Z, and couldn't figure out why they weren't used more often in text, they were such beautiful shapes! Heh.) My first fanfiction was at 10 for Star Wars and a Lucasfilm/Bantha Tracks competition.
No, this was my first finished slash story. I dabbled a little with Jack/Daniel for Stargate SG-1, but I never saw them as that way, so it was too hard to write.
Thanks for your kind words. Now that I've gotten over the hump for writing slashy stories, expect to see a few more as I fill up my au100 submissions in the future.
this is absolutely wonderful. thanks for sharing, whoever that one beta was did a good enough job. I think there shouhld be more stories with Anakin & Obiwan after Vaders death it would be interesting to see more about the Whills.
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No, this was my first finished slash story. I dabbled a little with Jack/Daniel for Stargate SG-1, but I never saw them as that way, so it was too hard to write.
Thanks for your kind words. Now that I've gotten over the hump for writing slashy stories, expect to see a few more as I fill up my au100 submissions in the future.
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Thanks for sharing:)
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I hope you post more stories :)
Lina.
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Thank you for sharing this.
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