Oh, I enjoyed that. I liked the idea of the path and the chimes and how walking the path helped Obi-Wan come to terms with all the difficult things he had had to face already in his apprenticeship. And I liked how he felt that Oneness with the Force at the end. I hope you do find time to write the other pieces.
This was extremely beautiful. Obi-Wan is learning to heal himself through onenness. Perfectly lovely and apropos to the character we will know in the future.
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Anakin?
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