Prompt #88 - Pain, for scroogette

[agentscully]

Comments

[anonymous]

Holy cow, this is great! Makes me want to read more. :) Nicely done.

[katzengirl]

That was really good. Now I wanna know more! I love how you took cannon and warped it into this new fascinating place. I thought the dialogue was nice. Olive was annoyingly vague, which suited, and Bella and Lyla each had their little moments.
I'm even more curious, what happened to Rainelle? If Bella is Rainelle's replacement, and Collectors can't die...
I may not be who it was written for, but I love it. :D