Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm working on chapter one right now, but heavily revising it and trying to cut it down to a reasonable size.
I like it. Your writing is excellent and very descriptive. I always like it when people manage to put a new spin on any of the pre-mades, especially Bella. I'd love to see where this goes.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love the Goth family and stories that involve Bella, but I haven't been able to find any horror-themed ones, so here we are.
I have the entire story plotted out, it's just a matter of writing it down. I hope you'll keep reading. :)
Interesting prologue! I must start by saying that I don't like horror and I usually have a problem with simstories where the text is more than a mere caption to the pic. However, you're obviously not new at writing. Fanfiction maybe? Anyway, it's very good and I'm looking forward to the next update :) Great Olive!
I usually have a problem with simstories where the text is more than a mere caption to the pic Oh man, I have a real problem with reining myself in in that respect. I'm writing Chapter 1 right now and I think I'm going to spend as much time going back through and trying to edit it down to a reasonable size as I've spent writing it. I'm also going to try to even out the picture/text ratio in future installments, too. The prologue was just a lot of Olive and Buzz sitting on couches looking at each other, so there wasn't much to take pictures of, but Chapter 1 has more action.
Good guess with the fanfiction, too. I've been writing most of my life, but fanfiction has dominated for years. I love it.
And I'm glad you like Olive. She's one of my favorite characters, and I love writing for her.
I like caption-style stories, but I'm aware not everyone would agree, many acclaimed stories in the community are text-heavy. Problem is, most of us here are not very good at writing, which is why I wish they would avoid it ^^ But this does not apply to you :) Or to a few others I read.
Olive is probably the best premade scenario by maxis, when you think of it, the Pleasantview suburban drama or Veronaville's tragedy, sure... but you just can't beat all those graves XD
I really admire good caption-only stories for the writer's ability to tell a full and interesting story with so few words. I spew words and still feel like I have problems conveying things properly.
I really wish there were more characters like Olive. Bella's mystery is interesting, and even though it's not happening in this story, I typically fully accept the alien abduction theory. There's a lot of unexplained deaths and what have you in Pleasantview, and aliens and mpreg in Strangetown, but Olive is a serial killer with such high levels of badassery that she straight up flaunts her activities by maintaining a cemetery in her front yard. THEN, when she isn't killing people, she goes and has a post-menopausal baby with Death.
Somehow I missed this comment, but what a wonderful surprise to stumble across!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, and appreciate that you gave it a chance.
Sorry for the unbelievably late reply, I'm revamping this chapter and saw your comment, so I wanted to let you know how awesome it was to find it. Thank you, again!
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I have the entire story plotted out, it's just a matter of writing it down. I hope you'll keep reading. :)
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Great Olive!
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I usually have a problem with simstories where the text is more than a mere caption to the pic
Oh man, I have a real problem with reining myself in in that respect. I'm writing Chapter 1 right now and I think I'm going to spend as much time going back through and trying to edit it down to a reasonable size as I've spent writing it. I'm also going to try to even out the picture/text ratio in future installments, too. The prologue was just a lot of Olive and Buzz sitting on couches looking at each other, so there wasn't much to take pictures of, but Chapter 1 has more action.
Good guess with the fanfiction, too. I've been writing most of my life, but fanfiction has dominated for years. I love it.
And I'm glad you like Olive. She's one of my favorite characters, and I love writing for her.
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Olive is probably the best premade scenario by maxis, when you think of it, the Pleasantview suburban drama or Veronaville's tragedy, sure... but you just can't beat all those graves XD
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I really wish there were more characters like Olive. Bella's mystery is interesting, and even though it's not happening in this story, I typically fully accept the alien abduction theory. There's a lot of unexplained deaths and what have you in Pleasantview, and aliens and mpreg in Strangetown, but Olive is a serial killer with such high levels of badassery that she straight up flaunts her activities by maintaining a cemetery in her front yard. THEN, when she isn't killing people, she goes and has a post-menopausal baby with Death.
To quote the Madagascar commercial: What a woman!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, and appreciate that you gave it a chance.
Sorry for the unbelievably late reply, I'm revamping this chapter and saw your comment, so I wanted to let you know how awesome it was to find it. Thank you, again!
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