Only Moreso - Depression - 2/?

[ageofalejandro]

Title: Only Moreso - Depression
Rating: M
Genre: drama, angst
Fandom: Marvel's Earth-199999
Pairing: Steve/Tony (developing relationship)
Warnings: self loathing to the nth degree, a suicide attempt later, suicide reference in this chapter
Intriguing Snippet: They'll find out how how weak he really is someday and he can't bear the thought. He doesn't

Comments

[whithertits]

Aaaaah, I read the whole thing. This is so wonderful, I think you're doing a great job. Looking forward to more. ♥

[ageofalejandro]

Thanks!

[blcwriter]

Poor Tony. Poor Steve. So loving this series. Keep up the excellent work!

[ageofalejandro]

Thank you! :D I'm glad you like it.

[trollmela]

Another well written and well thought out chapter. I like how you give us the story from both Tony's point of view and the people around it, especially without repeating the same scene. I also liked how you handled Pepper; she knows something, but she doesn't know it all. Thanks for sharing!

[ageofalejandro]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it. :D

[mortal_fool]

This is amazing :)
I'll check daily to see if you've updated, I literally cannot get enough of this story
I love the sense of history with Pepper knowing when somethings wrong and having a sense of what helps but the lack of understanding, and the helplessness to explain to Steve what's going on is brutal.
Tony's sections are painful, I think you've done an amazing job of showing how he so desparately needs people yet distances himself from the people he loves most.
Steve's reaction and the sense of his helplessness are portrayed brilliantly, I can't help but feel when this comes to a head, his sections will only be more painful.

Keep up the good work :)

[ageofalejandro]

Thank you! :D There might be a bit of a wait, actually, between now and the next chapter (I have two and a half weeks left of school!) but hopefully it'll be worth it. I actually have a significant portion of it written (about 3/4, I think) but I need to sit on it for a while.

Steve's reaction and the sense of his helplessness are portrayed brilliantly, I can't help but feel when this comes to a head, his sections will only be more painful.
Oh my goodness yes.

[sara_wolf]

Oh, poor, poor Tony. He's so amazingly broken.

[ageofalejandro]

Thank you. :D