Howdy. I am writing to you in reference to 'Tone Clusters' as a whole. I was truly inspired and amazed by the reality of society and would like to commend the various people who were able to bring the play to life as such and create a true meaning. It came to life, off the paper. Your mood is set to 'nervous' but now after seeing the plays there was no need to be. It truly did help me understand the distinct meaning of the play. Well done. Renee
i'm amazed at how you were able to get inside the minds of both sides of the story.
tone clusters is a very intriguing story and quite a sad one at that. the harshness of the voice and accusations are heart renching when you see the contrast in tone of the mother and father in your second poem.
the mother and father's voices seems to be pleading, for forgiveness and for the truth. what else could they possibly do?
i guess working so closely with the story it would be almost expected that some creativity may arise from a persons thoughts.
Nice entry Angela... but you didn't send me YOUR selection of YOUR best... so I am taking this one... ok? Like the way you segue from commentary to photo to poem... a great creative space you have made for yourself here. MG
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I am writing to you in reference to 'Tone Clusters' as a whole. I was truly inspired and amazed by the reality of society and would like to commend the various people who were able to bring the play to life as such and create a true meaning. It came to life, off the paper. Your mood is set to 'nervous' but now after seeing the plays there was no need to be. It truly did help me understand the distinct meaning of the play. Well done.
Renee
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tone clusters is a very intriguing story and quite a sad one at that. the harshness of the voice and accusations are heart renching when you see the contrast in tone of the mother and father in your second poem.
the mother and father's voices seems to be pleading, for forgiveness and for the truth. what else could they possibly do?
i guess working so closely with the story it would be almost expected that some creativity may arise from a persons thoughts.
nice work =)
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