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[agunagirlafix]

Title: Broken China Doll, Patched, Crying, Tenderness
Character(s): Dante/Roze, Lust
Rating: R
Prompt: a thousand martyrs I have made
Word Count: 5287
Summary: She smiled and cleared her plate for her caregiver, her protector.

(Euphemism for owner.)
Author's Notes: mindfuckery, Dante isn't nice, Roze is not herself, and Lust has never been nice.

Comments

[glazzal]

Meandered over here from the post in saffic. My complete awe before this fic seems to necessitate commenting here instead of there. Besides, I think I see more. O.o

And then I really don't know what to say. This is beautiful work, an incredible depiction of Roze's missing hours. I've always wanted to know what happens to her, and I couldn't possibly find a better description or a better story than this. The mind control shading into insanity is... very poetic. Even the sex is hot, in a dark, dank, rotting way. Ah yes, the dance. That dance. Whee.

I'm so glad I read this. :)

[agunagirlafix]

To tell you the truth, my current layout is an homage to this fic, so I'm glad you wandered over. Did you read the first piece that goes along with this? Because this is 2/7, although I neglected to put the first piece link on here.

And yes, the dance... it will come. *grin*

...writing sex with Dante without making it completely squicky was difficult, to say the least. *shudder*

Anyway, I'm glad you commented here and if you haven't, I hope you read the first piece.

[agunagirlafix]

Thanks. :) I saw you read the first two pieces... Did you get a chance to read the third?