Installment two...

[agyw]

so then I play with the placement and try to figure the background. At this point it's STILL a mess andhard to see (except in me noggin). Color, rendering, light and shadow SHOULD, change all that. This is the point I start thinking of palette. Though I won't color it (or I might color A sample piece, for Rachel's approval-- I want to get the light

Comments

I dig sketches...

[slatts]

I like this one!

Re: I dig sketches...

[agyw]

Thanks Slatts, I did a more refined rendering for her approval, and of course I can see all that's wrong with it. But I think most of it can be remedied with color and a bit more craftsmanship in the next go around. Love to hear your honest opinion though!

Love to hear your honest opinion though!

[slatts]

Share your client or AD's thoughts...

I saw it quickly this morning.

I thought there was a perspective prob-but realized they were kids.

I think there are tweaks you can do with color and finish line, as you write. The key will be to maintain your focal point and your strong depth of field, etc.

Look forward to more.

I'll repost this...

[agyw]

reply with the refinished rough. and then I'll post the color

From my project manager:

"I really like it, sorry I've been pretty busy here. Let me know how you're doing on it, I know it is a lot of work. But anything along these lines is perfect,

Thank you,"

What's not to love?
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