Once and Future Kings Can't Be 'Cute' (even if they are)

[ah_lisa]

Title: Once and Future Kings Can't Be 'Cute' (even if they are)
Pairing(s): pre-slash Merlin/Arthur
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/Spoilers: suggestive themes
Summary: Arthur writes a letter to Hunith about his love for Merlin. Cross-outs are abused.
Disclaimer: Do not own Merlin.
A/N: Written for merlinxarthur's fanfic challenge #1. I actually liked this fic until I

Comments

[shadecat]

*claps* AHAHA! I love the crossed out paragraph.

And yes, Arthur has a problem. Merlin needs to fix it. RIGHT AWAY! :)

[ah_lisa]

Unfortunately, I'm not all that good at writing 'problem fixing' so XDD Let's just leave that up to our imaginations... And, thank you for commenting :)

[archaeologist_d]

That was cute. I liked that Arthur was so tired he didn't realize what he was writing. Good job with this.

[ah_lisa]

Thank you, as always! :)

[abbyleaf101]

This is lovely! And so sweet, too! I love silly, crazy Arthur, and I love Hunith... she totally knows how Arthur feels anyway...

All in all, very enjoyable! I was grinning like a fool all the way through

[ah_lisa]

Hehe, thank you, glad you enjoyed. And yeah, Hunith's parts were my favorite to write, despite being so short XD

[sherrymarie]

HA! Arthur fails at subtly forever. ^_^

[ah_lisa]

You'd think Merlin would take a hint by now, right? XD

Thanks for commenting :3

[chalidragon]

I enjoy Arthur's comment about his breakfast - how he'll eat it anyway even if it does make me fat. I loved those parts of that episode. I was laughing so much ^_^

[ah_lisa]

Ooh, someone picked up on that! I'm pleased that you liked it :D