lemme go through it again...there is a typo "air" for "ear" "The shell of her air....
And is Giles quoting the lyrics...or is this him being inspired. I admit that I was a teeny bit jarred, um, since I was planning on using the hand behind your head thing as a description of him as a lover in a fic of mine....but I don't think that some one who was unfamiliar with the song would notice, because the imagery is quite beautiful....
No it's not him quoting the lyrics, that's why I kind of had a little creative license with them - it's meant to be his words - but does that not work you think?
Reni got me hooked on this song a week ago and we have been talking about writing a fic based on it. She started and then got very frustrated - and then i gave a suggestion and then before I knew it she had practically forced the task on me *grin*. It scared the hell out of me and I struggled for days! Then she comes and tears down my writer's block and my muse came back today! Phew - it was terrifying. And please, this song is so amazing - I hope to see the line in your fic as well. BG fic right??? NOt WG fic right??? You got me so damn hooked on Aftermath it's scary.... *whimpers*
Love it! And I am just so RELIEVED you finally got his pants off. Lord knows that would be a travesty to keep them on much longer. :P Love ya Adele, keep it coming
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Wonderful, dear. Just wonderful.
GAH
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Lay it on me sister - no critique - no changes?
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And is Giles quoting the lyrics...or is this him being inspired. I admit that I was a teeny bit jarred, um, since I was planning on using the hand behind your head thing as a description of him as a lover in a fic of mine....but I don't think that some one who was unfamiliar with the song would notice, because the imagery is quite beautiful....
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No it's not him quoting the lyrics, that's why I kind of had a little creative license with them - it's meant to be his words - but does that not work you think?
Reni got me hooked on this song a week ago and we have been talking about writing a fic based on it. She started and then got very frustrated - and then i gave a suggestion and then before I knew it she had practically forced the task on me *grin*. It scared the hell out of me and I struggled for days! Then she comes and tears down my writer's block and my muse came back today! Phew - it was terrifying. And please, this song is so amazing - I hope to see the line in your fic as well. BG fic right??? NOt WG fic right??? You got me so damn hooked on Aftermath it's scary.... *whimpers*
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so..how long do you think I should keep the boxers on before that becomes a travesty?
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good job adele! can't wait for more.
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Well it's not over yet now is it? I might maudle her if you don't behave! Had any nice wine lately? *wink*
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*sarcastically* THANKS!
*grin*
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