sobriety fever

[ahopelesslove]

sobriety fever...enjoy

they have me locked up inside
lungs full of compassion for death
awaiting to breath in toxic
toxic fumes of shock for love

im awaiting inside, waiting
waiting to tell you something

im apart from the norm
and all is well until this
unexpectancy has occured again
when will this feeling end

trashed apart from distance, falling

Comments

[ydontchajumpnow]

i had been waiting for sobriety fever its wonderful!
they have me locked up inside
lungs full of compassion for death
awaiting to breath in toxic
toxic fumes of shock for love

i dont know what it is but i love that part.....i love that it has a message to it much like most of your poems but i dont know why this one is just very for lack of words DEEP. i love everything you write keep on going (poet) lyle -------->kyra

[ahopelesslove]

i really like it when you comment on my lj! thanks a lot, it means so much to me

[ydontchajumpnow]

i only comment because i truly enjoy what you write makes me feel like there is hope out there hope because of people like you. -------> kyra

[ahopelesslove]

and this is an absolutely beautiful comment for me from you!!! thanks a lot!
-lyle

[_rhymeswithpity]

it finally came and its better than i could even expect it to be. i love you lyle. i love you so much. this will always give me strength. thank you
<3shannon

[notkristeng]

AH! Your poems are great! I loved this one!!! It reminds me of one I just posted...except about a mother, not a father.

[ahopelesslove]

thank you!!!! i really appreciate it. life sucks, especially right now, and this helped me out somewhat thanks!
-lyle