schizophrenic girls

May 24, 2005 19:48

theyve got me going ( Read more... )

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_rhymeswithpity May 24 2005, 20:07:03 UTC
bueno! mi gusta mucho

i love you

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gothika_angel May 25 2005, 03:55:20 UTC
Wow!!! I felt that
Amazing
I Love It! =)

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ahopelesslove May 25 2005, 19:29:58 UTC
thank you i apprecaite it!

-lyle

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ydontchajumpnow May 25 2005, 13:06:24 UTC
agh i never dislike anything you wtire i really like the ending though its AMAZING POET! write more lol

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ahopelesslove May 25 2005, 19:29:22 UTC
thanks so much! youre the mian person who comments, and i like that! i really appreciate it! ifi had more time id comment on your poems more often! unofortunately the computers i use are at the libary, not at home, and i have a certain time limit before i get kicked off. soon ill be able to have one at home!!!

-lyle

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ydontchajumpnow May 26 2005, 17:13:15 UTC
poet i only comment caus ei like what you write believe me if i didnt i wouldnt comment. i havent gotten the time yet to post my poems online yet and even if i did no one would like them lol cause they rarely if ever do rhyme. but point is your WAY BETTER then i will ever be. so uhm KEEP ON WRITING LYLE! ---->kyra

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organ_market May 25 2005, 21:39:04 UTC
i love the title and the ending and everything in between!

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survivor_bitch May 28 2005, 19:08:56 UTC
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organ_market May 30 2005, 01:34:07 UTC
haha omg.....

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forgottenevil June 5 2005, 04:34:45 UTC
your writing style blows me away
it is so intesnly interesting.
i loved the random, disconnected images created from this...that all have some weird link :D
*clap clap clap for you*

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