Perfect

[ahria]

Title:  Perfect
Series:  Sailor Moon
Pairing:  Usagi/Mamoru
Prompt:  "Perfect in weakness, I’m only perfect in just your strength alone."
Word Count:  1,023
Author's Notes:  1. This is set towards the beginning, where it's just Sailor Moon, Mercury and Mars.
2.  This fic vaguely references All Around Me but you don't have to read that one for this one to

Comments

[luna_hekate]

All three of them were missing school and more importantly (in Usagi’s opinion at least) sleep.

:D

Shoulders back, spine straight… she thought to herself as she took a deep breath.

I like how you captured that she's still unsure of herself and has to build up her self-esteem.

“For destroying the joy of countless children, I can’t forgive you! I, Sailor Moon, will punish you!” I love their proclamations!

Great action scene, well-written and easy to follow. It was easy to picture in my head.

I like how their romance is still awkward at this stage and he's thinking of Usagi when he's with Sailor Moon. And how the scouts worry about Usagi. They really did, even before they knew she was the Princess :)

I love it so much. *hugs it* I'm gonna reread the other one now that I've read some of the manga.

[ahria]

Thanks darling! I couldn't keep writing without your beta powers/ego stroking. : D