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Burdens

Jun 28, 2010 20:33

Title: Burdens
Series: Merlin
Pairing: None, really. Arthur/Merlin preslash if you squint.
Theme: "I want to be there for you, someone you can come too." My final entry for my album_mix claim!
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,019
Author's Note: First Merlin fic, ever. I'm really unsure about it, but oh well. I couldn't let go of the idea since watching "The ( Read more... )

2010, fandom: merlin, length: 1000+, claim: album mix

Comments 29

malevolent73 July 1 2010, 05:17:30 UTC

That was fantastic, and leaves me wanting more. It was like watching the intro to an episode right after the Season 2 finale. And then there was a commercial break. LOL

ahria July 1 2010, 15:13:43 UTC

Thank you so much!

kathyh July 1 2010, 09:02:10 UTC

That was beautifully written and a very believable interpretation of Merlin's mindset at the end of Season 2. I loved the fact that Arthur was trying to find out the problem but didn't know how to get through to him. I do hope you write more Merlin fic :)

ahria July 1 2010, 15:13:09 UTC

Thank you very much!

hecate_666 July 1 2010, 10:56:59 UTC

lovely angst! please tell me there is more!!!! I need arthur to make it better!!! thanks for posting! :)

ahria July 1 2010, 15:15:54 UTC

Sorry! It's just a one-shot... XD I seriously can't think of an IC way for Arthur to make it better yet. He was being so stubborn while writing this! It drove me crazy. ;_;

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ahria July 1 2010, 15:14:44 UTC

LOL, why are you ashamed of yourself?

Thank you!

giselleslash July 2 2010, 21:32:16 UTC

Nicely done - the remorse and sadness was especially touching.

ahria July 3 2010, 19:17:32 UTC

Thank you!