Lady So Divine, chapter two

Feb 22, 2007 23:42


Author's Notes

Feh. I think this fic will include Japanese honorifics.  Misaki isn’t that close with Tatsuhiro yet, and I think it’s something that bears pointing out. It’s not something I wanted to do, but I think it merits doing.

In this chapter: Welcome to the stream of consciousness!

I’m trying to portray Tatsuhiro as a man with a lot ( Read more... )

lady so divine

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ionlyeatcandy March 7 2007, 04:52:17 UTC
i read this back when you first posted it, but i didn't have time to put together any real sort of commentary for it. and i actually still don't now, but i figured i'd at least let you know that some one had read this.

yes, this comment is completely pointless.

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ai_ni_youkoso March 7 2007, 05:47:25 UTC
>.> Did you like it okay?

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ionlyeatcandy April 11 2007, 23:58:20 UTC
it hasn't been over a month, the date lies

i did like this chapter, i found myself identifying with Tatsuhiro in several places, from the the way he doesn't like to plan his days out in advance to his anxiety over critiquing Misaki's story which is better than what he feels he could ever write (this last one made me laugh at the irony).

i thought the story was good, i think it is in keeping with the characters from the anime and certainly a realistic look at where they might find themselves. there were a few awkwardly worded sentences, and a couple of spelling errors, but nothing a run through a grammar and spell checker couldn't fix. and certainly nothing that made me want to gouge my eyes out like some fics i've read...

for something written when you're supposed be sleeping, this is very good.

i hope that my total lack of repsonding to this hasn't been a turn off, Welcome to the NHK fandom is so small, i feel like we must stick together.

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anonymous April 17 2007, 00:58:44 UTC
HOLY CRAP, an NHK fanfic. And a well-written one, at that.

I LOVES IT, I DO.

Please update. <3 <3

*Awaits chapter 3.*

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kingjaime May 12 2007, 05:19:18 UTC
Hey. I'm hoping I'm contacting the right guy-- It's been a long time, but I think this is Nick. And if this is Nick, I swear to God, I'm going to scream.

This is Rose... or Ruby-- I don't know if you remember me, but we were really close friends back when the anime forums were still around (even if I can't remember the name of the right forum ^_^;;). Anyway, the point is I think I found you, and if you reply to this, I really don't know what I'll do. <333

My AIM is the fallen down, and my email is so.lovedrunk@gmail.com. :[ I hope this is you. Seriously.

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provides access anonymous January 18 2011, 08:09:40 UTC
Well … all I can say is, wow. This is an impressive collection of resources, thank you for taking the time to put everything together.

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