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"Join Us" 3/3 [Ten II / Rose / alt!Jack - Mature]

Jul 06, 2009 16:03

Title: Join Us (3/3)
Author: aibhinn
Rating: M
Characters: Ten II / Rose / Alt!Jack
Spoilers: None, if you know how Journey's End turns out.
Summary: Rose and the Doctor have got to know this universe's version of Jack pretty well-and have decided they want more than just friendship. More or less PWP, really.
Disclaimer: Except for Alt!Jack, nothing is ( Read more... )

chaptered, ten ii, fic, smut, doctor who, rose, alt!jack, ot3 ficathon, ten ii/rose/jack

Comments 20

carly21 July 7 2009, 01:52:06 UTC

Just the thing to turn a great night (Torchwood - CoE ;)) into a fantastic one!

Very hot smut and great descriptions of their feelings.

Without warning, Jack's hands slid into the Doctor's hair, pulling him closer, and at the same time, the Doctor fisted his hands in the back of Jack's shirt. Soft, gentle contact turned to raging passion, almost as much struggle for dominance as desire for each other.

I loved that kiss! ♥

aibhinn_fics July 7 2009, 07:31:37 UTC

:D Thank you! I rather did as well. This was (ahem) lots of fun to write. ;)

Thanks for the kind words; they're much appreciated!

gioiamia July 7 2009, 08:00:29 UTC

I really, really loved this. I would like to leave you some brilliant, insightful feedback, but honestly, I'm just in awe of how well you made this smutty scene be all about the pure emotions. Brilliantly done!

aibhinn July 17 2009, 06:40:18 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Alt!Jack is continuing to talk to me, so you may just be hearing some more from him. :)

jaquedark July 7 2009, 14:25:25 UTC

Well done... you left it hanging nicely in Chapters 1 and 2. Nicely written and such a good pairing! There should definitely be more stories like this! ^^

aibhinn July 17 2009, 06:40:56 UTC

Thank you! :) Alt!Jack is talking to me at the moment, and he won't shut up, so I may just have to write something down just to get him to be quiet for a while. :)

julesndairyland July 8 2009, 02:08:33 UTC

Guh!

*wipes up drool*

Awesome just doesn't begin to cover it; sexy & tender & hawt & caring & vulnerable & exciting & cuddily.
Just great.

And um... More please :)

aibhinn July 17 2009, 06:41:30 UTC

Oh, thank you! :) Jack's talking in my head again; he has more stories to tell, so you may just see more in this universe. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!