Fic: "Catch You When You Fall" - Honeydew Syndrome

Mar 25, 2008 18:19

Title: Catch You When You Fall
Pairing: Josh/Metis
Rating: Hard R - NC-17
Word Count: 2,541
Notes: Thank you so much to my darling mjules for the awesome beta! :)
Summary: Josh convinces Metis to come on a snowboarding trip with him. Metis (and his sore muscles) are not amused.

Don’t look at me like that, you bastard. I meant to do it this time. I’m tired. )

fanfic - me, honeydew syndrome

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nurikokoishii March 26 2008, 02:19:26 UTC
This was just great. XD It was so typically them, and such a great read.

“God, I can barely move. I even hurt in my armpits, how is that even possible?” That line made my crack up, because I totally understand how that feels. XD There were so many other great oneliners and quips, it was just great. Your characterization was spot-on and great dialouge.

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aidara March 26 2008, 02:23:14 UTC
Thank you so much! I always worry about my dialogue, so it's awesome that you like it! :D

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aidara March 26 2008, 02:22:21 UTC

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snarky_kat March 26 2008, 02:27:46 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA. OMG.

This line: "“Some day, I shall enact my revenge for this. And it shall be glorious.” made me LOL out loud, and I was just itching for some super hot j/m porn. So. THANKS. =D

SEQUEL? CAUSE. UM. JOSH AT A CONVENTION = HIJINX AND HILARIOUS SITUATIONS. COMIC BOOK CON OR ANIME? I KIND OF NEED TO SEE JOSH'S REACTION TO AN OVERWEIGHT, HAIRY, FORTY YEAR OLD MAN DRESSED UP AS SAILOR MOON. ZOMG

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aidara March 26 2008, 02:39:11 UTC
Ahaha, no, thank you, I'm so thrilled that you like it!

Lol, someone else suggested that, and now I don't think I'll be able to resist at least attempting it. I've been to Comic Con in San Diego, actually, so I have some textbook firsthand experience to pull from. XD

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bfm_od March 27 2008, 21:17:22 UTC
OH GOD DO IT.
I WILL BE ENACTING THE MOTION THAT MY USERPIC ILLUSTRATES UNTIL IT IS DONE.

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aidara March 27 2008, 23:23:01 UTC
ROFL I'll try!

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loveeandpeacee March 26 2008, 03:39:12 UTC
*holds up sign*
MOAR, plz.

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aidara March 26 2008, 03:43:34 UTC
Hee! <3 Possibly. I'll try.

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daisy_took24 March 26 2008, 03:47:32 UTC
yay!!! i loved it! write more! MORE!! now!! NOW!!! okay, i will give you a day to write more. how is that? cause honestly, that is about as long as i can wait.

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aidara March 26 2008, 04:47:27 UTC
AHAHAHA I LOVE YOU

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