"THREE" Chapter One

Mar 17, 2009 00:17



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aiden4child March 17 2009, 11:20:03 UTC
Yay! *hugs you back*

So glad to hear that!

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silverstrings March 19 2009, 10:28:45 UTC
Hey hon! I've read this on my cell over two days, I'm stuck in Denmark still, of course three of my cases has really blown up while I was away...so yeah, I was optimistic thinking I could do it in two days :P. Okay, enough whining, over to the story: I don't know if you've counted me in the four people, but I totally think I get it :). And I'm extremely excited to see where it leads. Love the dialogue in particular, it was really entertaining. Which I reckon is a good thing when you go ahead and do something as crazy as write outside of J2 lol. But in all seriousness, great idea to write this. Embrace your inner artist and use it for good! Miss you sweetie, take care! *huggles*

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aiden4child March 19 2009, 10:55:22 UTC
Hey you!

Wow, thank you! Things sound a little crazy! I hope you don't get to stressed out.

And yes, i was definitely counting you! Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. The dialouge was very fun to write, with the exception of the last scene, as i'm sure you would understand, and it definitely makes it more interesting. Glad you enjoyed, and i can't wait to see what you think about the rest of it.

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silverstrings March 22 2009, 20:12:38 UTC
Hey again!

I'm excited to read the rest, it's an interesting subject for a story indeed...

*huggles*

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aiden4child March 22 2009, 22:10:24 UTC
Thank you!

*Hugs you*

I'm working on the second chapter currently

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jayneeeee911 March 19 2009, 16:16:42 UTC
“Cause if you called me Phinny, I would punch you in the ovaries.

That really made me smile.

Hope theres gonna be more of this...I want these boys to seriously get it on....cos as a very wise women once said it doesn’t get much hotter than that!

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aiden4child March 19 2009, 19:26:57 UTC
Hahaha! Glad you enjoy it! I tried to accomplish that with it, and to make the characters as much like the people they are based off of as possible. It actually came out suprizingly well.

And yes, there will be MUCH more of this, and though i can not reveal what will happen yet, you can tell some of it just from the warnings.

And yes, wise indeed! hehehe!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Hmmmm... zsenshi789z March 20 2009, 02:03:03 UTC
I remember writing some of this...

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Re: Hmmmm... aiden4child March 20 2009, 02:38:38 UTC
bout time you commented, ho!

Yes yes, thank you for helping with that last scene.

Would you like me to add you as helping in this? I didn't really wanna draw attention to you if you didn't want it, so yea.

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