Haunted: Chapter 13

May 17, 2009 15:04

Title: Haunted (13/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Ohno inherits a big and ramshackle mansion from a distant relative, but there is much more in his new house than it seems at first sight.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1803
Disclaimer: The plot is mine, and the wrapping is thanks to zazasukie ^__^
AN: Un-betaed and english isn't my mother tongue.

Chapter 1
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multichapter, au, ohmiya, haunted, pg

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happyeling May 17 2009, 16:31:11 UTC
Wow~ sugoi! This is getting more and more exciting! ^^

...and...I'm hanging! What's next??? I can't wait any longer! Nino's past??? OMG! I wanna know~ I can't wait...but...I'll still be waiting for the next chapter ^^"

Gambate!

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aidill May 18 2009, 17:20:53 UTC
>///< Thanks!
What is going to happen next chapter? Who was Nino? What was his relation with Ohno's family?
Dun dun duuuuuun

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glos10 May 17 2009, 16:48:30 UTC
GREAT^^!
now we will know, it really make you feel so curious!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAH i wanna know!

I like so much how your story is growing with nino's past and the old connection they got <3!

*hugs*

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aidill May 18 2009, 17:21:29 UTC
I'm really happy you like this series! *hugs back*
I'm trying to tie up the loose ends nicely... so it's time to explain some things about the characters and other things that had appeared in past chapters. ^____~

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nicefinalbeam May 17 2009, 16:53:48 UTC
This is a really interesting chapter. If you don't mind, I did notice something where your English isn't quite correct.

We don't say "falling stairs down", it's "falling down the stairs". :)

Thanks for sharing!

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aidill May 18 2009, 17:22:12 UTC
I don't mind at all! Thanks a lot for pointing me the mistake, I had changed it already! ^____^

I'm glad you find this chapter interesting!

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sheranino May 17 2009, 17:13:12 UTC
No.... please don't stop here!
Please continue soon! can't wait to know what's inside the diary. arrrgh!!! can't wait till next update.. T_T

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aidill May 18 2009, 17:23:55 UTC
Yep, the chapter ends here! I'm evil like that! XD
But don't worry, I'll update soon with Nino's past life story. ^___~

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ltgmars May 17 2009, 17:34:19 UTC
AHHHHHH I want to know more! :o :o :O

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aidill May 18 2009, 17:29:14 UTC
I'm glad you like the story! ^_____^
I'll try to update as soon as possible!

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