Brightly Wound 05

[aiienzo]

Aiji stared at Miyavi. Miyavi stared at Aiji. One was lost for words, the other, waiting to get punched in the face again. Aiji, however, didn’t seem quite in the mood as he had ten minutes ago, his mouth slightly open as he tried to read anything on Miyavi’s face that could convince him of foolery, lies, or a badly-timed joke layered on what was

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[kuroineko_chan]

Ahh Meevs' beautiful face got bruised again D:< , bad Aiji, BAD!

“Well yes. I don’t think it’s proper to bang you without at least buying you dinner first.” Maya is such a gentleman XDDD

This ain't finished, is it? *puppy eyes* We want the sexy steamy following part 8D

[aiienzo]

When you say Meevs, I immediately think of my puppy, haha. silly meevers.

Well, I'll tell you there will be a sidestory, and MAYBE some steamyness if I get a few more reviews asking for it ^-^

[uchihashamey]

*look, I'm a good girl, I'm writing a comment! :D Now I want my smut >D* hehe

I loved how they finally talked and had a moment so sweet *_* but.. poor Miyavi... Aiji is so bad for hitting him XD But I'm happy to know that a few drinks will make him being forgiven XD (bah, I know thay can be good friends if they want to >D)

(uh, also, sorry for the bad English.. *hits herself* >_<)

[aiienzo]

thanks for your comment!
and don't worry, the smut will come :)

[lil_neko1321]

ahhhh x3 so cute!!

I love sappy wordplay it give me a warm fuzzy feeling lol

But I love smut more!lmao

...

it gives you a different kind of fuzzy feeling xD lol

more plz??? :P

[aiienzo]

the smut is coming, I promise :D

thanks for the comment dear!

[nyu_kun]

Awwww, I couldn't have asked for a better ending. ^-^ ♥♥♥

You did a good job with the drama and tension, writing it so it wasn't terribly cliched-sounding or boring to read. And again, their dialogue is so cute and funny. x3

♥♥♥♥

(Sorry I didn't comment earlier ^^;;) This mention of writing a bonus chapter intruiges me, I'd love to read it. :D

[aiienzo]

thank you! sounding sappy and cliched is something I never want to do in extremes XP

kiri_ka just wrote a sidestory, if you're interested in that, and the wonderful steamy bonus chapter is next on my list of tasks, lol

[0h_my_juliet]

Why, this is an -awesome- fic, I just wanted to tell you.
Its nice to see LM.C fic out there, its almost non-existant. xD

But OMG. MOAR. xD

[aiienzo]

thanks!
and I'm having computer problems at the moment, but as soon as everything is running smoothly, I'll have another chapter out ^^

[0h_my_juliet]

WOO! xD

I can't wait. ^^